My Valintine wish,
is to be with someone special,
who love.
My Valintine wish,
is to be noticed,
by friends and family.
My Valintine wish,
is to have someone knock on the door,
and tell me to be their Valentine.
My Valintine wish,
is to have a boyfriend,
who'd bring me roses and candy.
My Valintine wish,
is to love a kind and caring persn,
who loves me for who I am.
My Valintine wish,
is to sit and cuddle with someone,
while my parents aren't home.
My Valintine wish,
is to see me future,
on future Valentine days.
I have so many Valentine wishes,
that won't fit on this page,
but I know this is useless.
I know these wishes will never come true,
I tell myself to stop wising,
because they won't come true.
It's a holiday that I hate,
Valentine's Day or not,
even though it may be too late.
I'd learn to love this day again,
if all my woshes came true,
thats my Valentine wish.
Author notes
I'm not really a big Valentine Day fan. So I'd figure I'd write this, so if I offend you in any way, I am sorry. Please let me know.
Written February 16th, 2006
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this is good...but i feel you could have expressed your emotions more thoroughly and you have a few spelling errors also...just typos though
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no offence taken. and if you do they can get off your site. I liked this, but it didn't feel full of emotoin, it was kind of just there, you did construct it very nicely and it flowed well. Keep it up and one day you'll have a special valentine and you will be happy for the holiday. or maybe not, bc you can show your love everyday okay, i'm done. nice write.
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