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fish don't have feelings anyways

i have been finding myself lost

i have been finding myself

even if all the notes are wrong i am still singing

i found out that i am wrong about me
but i am still here

i sat on top
and fell to the floor


to the highest tops and longest lows

i still walk along singing all the notes are wrong

hurting people when i can cutting people opening

like you do a fish

you can eat fish

its okay fish don't have feelings anyway

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Written February 15th, 2006

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  • Shadows Unspoken
    February 26, 2006
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    nice job!

    A bit confused! It was powerful and sounded like u juss wanted to get some hanger out. Am i right?? Anyway I still liked it!! Good write! sumtimes u juss got put it all down so it wont hang wit you forever

    -Shadows-