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You win!

Why did you come around?
Was it just to mess up my life?
It was perfect before you came.
I had love and respect from my family.
You came in all thin and beautiful.
My aunt loved me, I was her little angle.
Thats over now.  She does not love me and you know it.
I trusted you at one point in my life.
Till one day things were gone.
You stole my life and my wants.
I told you all my thougths, you used them against me.
I told you who I like, you started talking to him that night.
You dated him at the end of that year.
How can I compete with you?
I wanted to cheer.  
Guess what you did to.
Anything I do you try to do it better.
And I know you will win.
So from now on you will win, I will let you win.
I don't like to, but that's the only way to get peace.

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For once and only once I wrote about myself and it was in away to get stuff out of my system.
Written February 15th, 2006

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  • June 3, 2006
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    one day she will know that she cant always win; and you shouldnt give up! go for what you want to do... like cheerleading: i know you love it.dont pay attention to what serria says or does. you have friends and you can get along just find with out her! love ya lots steph(bff)