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The End

The end has come
the end is here
i cant hear
i cant cry
even through i can feel your tears
I'm the problem
the rope can solve
i will stand so very tall
ill push the chair away from me
ill hang myself
ill set myself free
this is the end its come at last
i cant feel
this pain will disappear
at last
ill kill myself
and fix
this all
take way the hate and love
from you all
i had to do it
i had to die
i had to leave
I'm sorry i did not say good bye
my head hurts
and
i can breath
I'm not depressed
i just cant see
i cant come back
and i would not if i could
I'm a demon
I'm the past
don't leave flowers on my grave
don't try to save me
and be brave
I'm gone
I'm lost
i want to be forgot
I'm not lonely
or even sad
I'm just dead
I'm just gone
it not your fault
and every day you ll be just fine
and every day you don't have to cry
ill lay in my grave
and ill decay
in the dark
with the bugs for my friends
my body will turn to dust and
this is my end
cause the end has come
and the end is now gone
i can still feel you tears
and you should always remember that nothing was your fault
im sorry you made the mistake of giving me your heart!

Author notes

it sucks and i need to rewrite but whatever i wanted 2 update again
Written February 15th, 2006

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  • silenced soul
    February 27, 2006
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    god stasier this was really good im like tearing up and i kno im a drama quen but this was just really good i wish i could write this way i want to update but i dont have nething to update idk ill see well yea ill ttyl sry it took me so long to comment love you lots~lissa~


  • Alice Anesthetized
    February 17, 2006
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    still sad.

    don't worry, be happy!
    o god.
    Nvm.
    How are you, we haven't talked in ages.


  • myselfinthemaking
    February 16, 2006
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    Well, I'm sure you could do more work to it, but it's good as it is. I like it, and I can relate to the feeling well. Good job, and keep writing.