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I found some old and unfinished poems!

I found these on some papers. Thought I'd share them.

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CHEESEBURGERS (Started by Lil Bro):

Wash your hands before you eat...
Your cheeseburger! (x2)

But you should not eat a fleet...
Of cheeseburgers! (x2)

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UNNAMED DEPRESSION SONG:

Inside of my mind
Inside of my head
Inside of my brain
The cells are dead.
I don't know how to live this life I've led
I don't know what to to do...I just wanna be dead.
I'm just so fed up.
These people just won't grow up.
I just wanna throw up.
I'm about read to give up.

This life is tearing me apart...
I don't know where to begin...
I wish I could just restart...
I can only imagine what I could've been...

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PAINT (Spoof on "Faint" by Linkin Park):

(coming soon)

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That will be all...

...for now!

Author notes

lol.
Written February 15th, 2006

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  • Shadow Child 13
    June 24, 2006
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    the first one waz cute! i really liked the second one. I can relate to the verses and the rhyme is good.


  • Nyangel
    February 27, 2006
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    I ♥ the 2nd one! It's dark, sad, and beautiful...(not trying to sound corny or anything) anyway, IM me sometime, I'm back on!

    Love much,
    Lace♥ngel13

  • Futil1ty
    February 17, 2006
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    First of all, it's "life I've led." And I will fix it because it should say "live this life I've led."


  • February 16, 2006
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    I really like the second one too. ^^


  • Nephlim
    February 15, 2006
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    The second one was really good, but the first one... well, I don't really think it's very good, not to be mean, that's just my opinion. And, on the second poem, " I don't know how to life this life I lead" it doesn't make much sense to me. But, it was a good poem . Good job.

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