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thoughts of today...

I Give Up...
shhh don't tell him...
she knows...
how hard it is..
to see this...
what to say...
how to react....
how to...
Love??
sigh
what now....
how do i take care of it...
tell him wants bothering me???
ill find a way...
sigh
some how...

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Written February 15th, 2006

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  • hearts of the lost
    February 24, 2006
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    yeah the poem was on the day that i was really frustrated with things between me and danny...
    sigh
    i was really sad
    and i just felt like writing it out...
    dawn was all like...
    go nyssa..
    i was like...not now...
    sigh but things are getting better.
    Edited on Feb 24, 9:35 p.m. because ''.


  • Academy
    February 24, 2006
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    Nyssa, this is really good!! I like it a lot. It is complicated, but the words are simple. The way that you wrote it is a bit confusing...but in the best way possible.

    It seems like this poem is about two things, both of them are tearing you apart...but at the same time it could be just one issue.

    I wonder, what is this about? (you don't have to tell me...)