Taunt, to breaking point
her nerves jangle with
every pinprick of sound,
surrounding her privately
erected cocoon;
Hidden deep within, the
pulsating throb of racing blood
churns at an electrifying rate
across the cerebral hemisphere;
Adrenalin surges..relief pours
into every vestige of of her very being;
Caught in this whirlwind of
euphoria...she hesitates;
Leap and take the consequences..
or pause and take the safe path
sure in its footing;
To hell and back is a journey
not known for its safety..
so care is required;
As a new-born struggling
to come to grips with this
alien world, she looks tentatively
around...will they look down
on such a novice..or will
they embrace a familiar love,
of the written word.............................
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Written February 15th, 2006
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You are very kind
Many thanks for the lovely comments 
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that is really good. Hope that you win the contest. Well very nice keep up the good work
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Thank you.I am delighted that you enjoyed it
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Thank you..delighted that it left you pondering a though
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Indeed
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Thank you for your kindness It is greatly appreciated
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Aw my friend..points are not required, but a kind word is always gratefully accepted
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well...to be honest this world of poetry is rather like a labyarinth (spelling
)...many hidden pitfalls so who knows what path she will finally take
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Hidden deep within, the
pulsating throb of racing blood
churns at an electrifying rate
across the cerebral hemisphere;
Adrenalin surges..relief pours
into every vestige of of her very being
Wow!!!!! I mean what else can I say??? Amazing job. -
As a new-born struggling
to come to grips with this
alien world, she looks tentatively
around...will they look down
on such a novice..or will
they embrace a familiar love,
of the written word.............................
i really enjoyed the imagery here. this could be said of so many things. i like that you left it this way. now you have me thinking. viyanna r langager
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revelations of choice
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Excelleny
Ah giving birth to an orgasim, a child , an idea,or a poem . The intence feelings as it moves from its concieption to the light of the world.Only the mother can truely know how hard the birthing was. -
A great piece dear friend.
sorry not enough points to applaud you.
Shahrzad
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so what path did she take? good work.
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lol...now when have you ever known me to be "romantic" Still..am glad it appealed my friend. Hope all is well in your world
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Ms Cutie, goes romantic, perhaps I've opened my eyes. Very special, thank you.
Edited on Feb 15, 5:39 p.m. because ''.
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