Your soul
like the
configuration in
atoms
of electrons starts with
very simple emotions like passion
and need
but branches out with complex
thoughts and feelings until there are ten or
fourteen parts connected to one level of real being
Author notes
taking a break from chem homework. to explain, this is based on the electron configuration...
2 electrons on the first sublevel of the first level
8 electrons in the second level, in sublevels of 2 and 6
18 in the third level, in sublevels of 2, 6, and 10
32 in the forth level, in sublevels of 2, 6, 10, and 14
so the syllables in each line correspond to the sublevels, and each stanza is one level
Written February 15th, 2006
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Hey! Great job on this poem, it's great!! And to think it was inspired by chem, lol. Keep up the great work!!!
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heh, i used to be like that, then i failed out of UVM and now have to go to Community college for a semester. i learned the eroor in my ways
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That's awesome, you combined chemistry and poetry. Really great and interesting. I've done stuff like this before (actually more elaborate) but I've never actually done the homework
Genius!
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wow better than one would think about a chem poem! lol good job though, i like it a lot! -
Don't you love chem? XD
I'm sure yoru chemistry teacher is proud!
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I wish I would of had something like this to help me remember all of that when I had chem. Wonderful discovery here.
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hah, much better than chem homework . i'd have to agree.
i like how youu configure everything into the poem quite nicely.
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That's real cute... In fact I'm inspired to do a piece myself.. Have fun with the form... Good work
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hahaha yeah. too much chem does htat to a person
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this is interesting and thoughtful. i love that you were inspired by chemistry, of all things.
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wow very good write here you expressed yourself well, thanks for sharing this piece, and keep up the awesome poetry!!!!!!!!!
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yeah well i have been being driven insane by chemistry for the past four hours, so on a short study break i wrote this... i thought the form was kinda clever, i had fun with it at least. thanks for the complements!
LP&CG
Liz
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With out the chemistry links
(because I am so bad at it)
Its a great poem and very true, I love the form of the poem its great,
I actually throught your poem would go off in a compleatly different direction, but thankfully it didn't only because then I would have said that it was too predictable.
The form of your poem works well.
Well done
Illiterate Igunana
Ps Thank you for commenting on Another Crappy poem
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