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Wishing on you

Sometimes I cry,
and I dont even know why
I feel like an ocean,
so many different emotions
And as much as they turn,
for your love I ern
These feeling's I cant hide,
Cant fight for what I feel inside
If I see a shooting star,
I'll be sure to make a wish from afar
I'll wish that dreams can come true,
That way I will always have you.

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Written February 15th, 2006

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  • Lionslove silver member
    February 21, 2006
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    beautiful

    i don't know who this is about, unlike stace..but, beautiful metaphors and flow...from your, as usual...beautiful heart. good luck with your love desired. atb, -encore-
    Edited on Feb 21, 8:41 because 'mispell'.

  • AMEgirly
    February 20, 2006
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    this is so good! i feel like this way all the time! butcha just gotta keep moving on! awesome write!

  • Jaderoses88
    February 17, 2006
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    This is so sweet. and my heart is filled. Love can hurt just be careful.
    Toot

  • Flames of Fire
    February 16, 2006
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    I cant stay on long but really good.

  • -Crzyme-
    February 16, 2006
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    awww this is so sweet. i already know who diz is about. good job.
    -stacy-

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