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Spun out of Control

I’ve had my eyes on  you
But You  just see right through
my attempts
And I just don’t why I keep trying
Lying to myself that
One day
You will
You will
Oh You will
See me as I am
This wonderful thing you’ll be missing out on!

And I just don’t know why I keep trying
To win your affections
I’m asking myself
Why can’t I just go on and find somebody new
Oh You
You got me
Spun out of control!

See I’ve been through it before but you
You
You
You
You
You
Got me
Spun out of control

My heart is broken
But I’m foolishly still not over you
So I’m going to keep trying!

And I just don’t know why I keep trying
I’m asking myself
Why can’t I just go on and find somebody new
Oh You
You got me
Spun out of control!

Author notes

lol yeah....Fred is a losa and I'm a losa for these lyrics lol but anyway I had fun writing this song and there is alot of humming in the song and "mmmmms" lol but it's just about a girl who really is into a guy but he isn't into her...lol story of my life jk
Written February 15th, 2006

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  • Sandygram
    February 19, 2006
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    WONDERFUL

    These are wonderful lyrics. Very sad and heartfelt. I can kind of relate to them. This will make a great sad love song. Thank you for sharing. Take care, Sandy


  • Thebigreveal
    February 18, 2006
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    Thanks alot!


  • sleepingINblackRain
    February 18, 2006
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    Wow this poem is really good, i really enjoy the words and how they flow together. Awesome write keep it up

    !x!Taylor