Like a dancing flame
Things aren't the same
As our love grows
Like melting wax
In a candle flows
Our passion changes
As the days go by
The romance ranges
In the blink of an eye
Like the shining stars
In the dark black sky
Our love's free from bars
As we seem so high
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Written September 22nd, 2002
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Like the shining stars
In the dark black sky
Our love's free from bars
As we seem so high
Just how love should be!
Az
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Very good
Your poem is like a prod for me to re-think my love. My love is not the only love I had/have, there are others.
Besides, your poem is so harmonic that it resembles a song. Great (I only have one applaud left, would give you more :-( )
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mew... Little to say, but a smile is verdict.
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this is great
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Great Write. It's pretty. Keep up the writing, your a great poet.
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awe
this is such a lovely and beautiful poem that you have written 
very well done! thank you for sharing this very positive write
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i love the discription in this, so metaphoric, i also love the way its free spirited. bravo!
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it's such a beautiful poem, about how love sets you free if I'm right...just a simple feeling but it tastes so good. keep it this way, Valeriane
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