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Hello Darling

Hello my dear darling,

There's something I have to say. No matter what happens my love for you

will grow each day. I don't care how far you are I will always wish you

a goodnight. I want to last forever so this is what we'll do, We can

wait forever if that's what you want to do. So take my hand I offer you

and walk me down this path. This path of happy endings and never ending

laughs. Through these hard roads we will succeed. Don't mind what people

say dear you are all i need dear, and you are what i have. So promise me

your love dear because I have shed my finial tears. I've given you my

heart dear. I know you love me as I do if we stay strong there's nothing

we can't do. I'll hold you in my arms dear till you need a breath. I'll

love your forever until my final breath. Together we will smile through

all these memories we bring forth. We will enjoy ones company

forevermore. I can whisper our song dear and fall a sleep in your arms

dear. Look me in the eye love and tell me you are mine.

Author notes

Hello Darling is written as a letter but it is lyrics to the love of my life. Tell me what you think. :]


JIM KID
Written February 15th, 2006

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