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Peace

candlelight
whispers in the dark
my name on Your lips
peace

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A poem I wrote during my Valentine's "date" with Jesus. Yes, it's about Him. Laugh if you want. I'm proud to have Him for a Valentine.
Written February 14th, 2006

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  • gbo
    February 14, 2006
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    awwwww i love the shortness... makes you think about the poetry more..... a very relaxin poem compared to some out there... i love how u structured it.... very nicely done!!!!


  • mynameishoneybee
    February 14, 2006
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    sweet and succinct. hugs to you dear.


  • classical beauty
    February 14, 2006
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    awww this was v. sweet, i'm bitter about valentine's but this is great all the same, i loved it, well done and keep on writing xxx