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Master's Pleasure -Part8- She's Got Control

She slowly licks his ear
Moving softly down his neck
To his chest
Taking each of his nipples in her mouth
Gently nipping at them

He groans

She returns to her exploration
Moving down his muscled abdomen
The trail of wet
Heading straight for his erected tool

She quickly licks the tip
And softly blows on it
Then heads towards his thighs

A disappointing moan escapes his lips
And she just laughs
A wicked little laugh

He tries to grab her
To put her where he wants her to be
Finds himself fighting the cold steel
Of his own cuffs

She looks up at him
A smile of pure enjoyment on her lips
Just before her tongue lashes out
Striking his tightened sac

He jumps
Slightly startled, but even more so aroused
As she takes each one into her mouth
Sucking...
Sucking...
Sucking...

Her lips seal his jewels
Traps them in her hot and wet oral cave
Rocking them against her tongue

His legs quivering,
He's moaning
Wanting to thrust himself in her

She releases him from her grasp
Only to take his shaft
Into her eager mouth
Deep into her throat

She strokes him at her pace
Controlling him
His nerves tense,
On fire,
Needing that release

And she brings him to the very edge
His orgasm ready to unleash into her
All his control lost

With one final flick of her tongue
She stands, smiling at him
And quietly tells him,
"Not yet..."

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Written February 14th, 2006

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  • my-masquerade
    February 23, 2006
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    Wow this part is wicked... and i mean that in the origional sense of the word not the idiotic trendy way. This is very hot and exciting and amazing as always. I can't beleive how much a missed in a few days.Dying for the next ones.

  • February 22, 2006
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    Good :D

    Wow, I can tell you..this is definitley what Erotic Poetry is all about. The ONLY thing missing, and this is not necessarily a bad thing, is a spiritual connection. It's great. You may want to include some more vivid images but that is just a suggestion. Thanks for a great read!

  • mozarts funeral gold member
    February 20, 2006
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    hehe i definately like your style! i LOVE teasing the man until he can't control himself any longer!! it means i have him at my mercy *giggles* how naughty and delicious! wonderful job....off to read more
    Rosita

  • Swtpoetryman
    February 20, 2006
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    HOT, HOT, HOT!

    NOT YET!

    WOW! This is so HOT! I wouldn't mind be handcuffed by a Dominatrix like you! I'll definately have to come back to look at more of your EROTICA - preferably before hitting the hay so I'll have all night to think about you! Take a look at NAUGHTY BOY if you haven't seen it, yet! I'd give you applause but my hands are too busy!
    Peace & Love!
    Earl.
    Edited on Feb 20, 7:46 p.m. because ''.

  • Abreadcrumbandfish
    February 20, 2006
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    aaaahhhh how enjoyable....awesome awesome poem!
  • lightVdark
    February 17, 2006
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    WAY COOL !!!! to we get another part ??
  • the hockey goalie
    February 16, 2006
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    oh my god you had me jumping until the end.....and i went augggghhh.......it was wonderful

  • la dolce vita silver member
    February 16, 2006
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    MY OH MY .......TOO HOT BY FAR , NOW THIS IS WHAT I AM TALKING ABOUT, SEXY ,DOMINATION, HOT. THAT IS ALL I HAVE TO SAY!!!!
    Edited on Feb 16 because ''.

  • bluebethy
    February 15, 2006
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    lol loved this its so fun to get my bf to the point where he cant control anymore and wants to so bad then i just stop and say i g2g or make him wait a lil while he loves it though
    Great right truly your collections are amazing you have a really great amount of talent
    ~*~ Beth ~*~
  • D 1 N Only
    February 15, 2006
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    good

    Sounds like a great session. Thank you!

  • dreamygenie01
    February 15, 2006
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    this is so great. very good job.

  • Immortal Obscurity silver member
    February 15, 2006
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    Wow, I loved it! It's hot, passionate, and sexy the entire way through. Thanks for sharing!

  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    February 14, 2006
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    That is an understatement. = )

    Thanks for the comments, there will be more coming.

    Autumn

  • ZorroTheFox silver member
    February 14, 2006
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    allll right, I got to be first to post for once. I enjoyed this all the way through, you sure have naughty thoughts
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