Memories are all I have for right now.
Yet I know our time has not ended.
Searching my soul for answers,
Outrage I want to be,
Under fire my spirit is,
Love has collapsed inside me.
In a state of confusion I am,
Seeking wisdom to get through this day.
Life has become an empty shell,
Others see the pain,
Smiles have faded away,
Testing this love once again.
Yvonne J. Griffin
2/14/06
Author notes
today is not a good day for me.... My friend was tranfered to another office in his trade. Or should I say line of work.
Yvonne
Written February 14th, 2006
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Sad and Emotional
Temporary seperation often makes the Binding stronger and lets us know our heart better. A sad emotional write but beautifully done.
Love and blessings from India - Joel - -
Yvonne
This is a lovely write, very moving with deep emotion, everything will work out
Hugs and Love
Karen
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sorry to hear your dear friend is moving to another department that might bring you close now you never know see each other each day now the heart may grow fonder and he may want to see you outside work you just never know hang in there girl
sad but good poem
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Memories (are)is all I have for right now.
We spend at least 1/3 of our lives at work. It really helps if it is somewhere we enjoy. I wish you well.
John -
Awww Yvonne, NO! I'm sorry to hear that my friend, but it's not over my sweet, if it's meant to be.
Love Joan
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I am so sorry things seem to be going so screwy lately--but it happens even to the best of us. This acrostic (which I cannot seem to write in to save my life) is lovely and speaks to the soul of disappointment. I hope that discouragement has since subsided. Things will work out if they're meant to, right? I am sorry that I do not read more of your work...every time I come here, something new is revealed.
Take care and be well.
Many blessings,
Raven Aurora
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Good poem, quite sad though Keep writing I liked your honesty here Thanks for your comment on my poem Good flow
All the best
Pozo
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Life is full of challenges. Everday is a struggle but to see all the tomorrows one must adapt to what ones's life brings...Of your poem it was a little rough but still a good write. Thanks for sharing it...
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this was beautifully dark. I liked all the metaphors you used, and the poem was short enough but powerful.
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