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Take peace in solace
Form no grace of will
Acknowledging lost aptitude
Requires great skill

Say "Hello" to paradise
Release the entrapment
Of a soul
Rest beyond the weary
Fortitude admittedly old

Push aside all restrictions
Fight as you will
Grant me no jurisdiction
A fear of man still

No pain for your suffering
Lack of heat for a cold
No need for your wanting
Hidden barriers; blocked doors

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Written February 12th, 2006

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  • metrophobiac
    April 25, 2006
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    very interesting, introspective one.....


  • February 24, 2006
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    niiiice.


    i miss you!



    <3 Courtney



  • DarkChildsKiss silver member
    February 17, 2006
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    I really liked this poem. It speaks great volumes! Showing such strong and amazing imagery as well. A well written and great write!


  • Iohagh
    February 14, 2006
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    As Bekah says you have an old soul and I should consider that too. I pray it does not bother you that I like you and have some love for you. Maybe, thats me a Mother and a Baby, a Maybe. LOL. Excellent poetry.