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A little Faery walked up to her Faery Godmother with a smile on her face,
and asked her Faery Godmother about the secrets of the Faery race...


She asked why humans thought they were all lies?
Why when they came out during the day they had to be in disguise?
Why there were two Courts who could not get along?
Why Faeries like merry dance and song?
Why they could use magic while humans could not?
Why they had much gentler words and thoughts?
Why with nature do they help and assist?
And then she asked last, why do Faeries exist?


The Faery Godmother leaned close with a smile on her face,
and told her Faery Goddaughter the secrets of the Faery race...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • ShelleyA gold member
    November 26, 2007

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    A lovely story poem. Good flow, rhyme and tone. Nice depth of feeling. Nice rhythm. An enchanting piece. Well penned and much enjoyed.

  • NooNiThEWitcH
    June 11, 2007

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    very nice.. although I was hoping to know "the secrets of the faery race"
    Cute and magical poem.. and the background is a perfect fit. the little faerie is peaking at the humans

    Congrats on the bronze..
    Keep on writing,
    Nooni
  • Diatribes
    May 31, 2007
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    Im no farie, but I wonder some of these same things.
    I like the way the rhyme flows here.

  • Meggh LotusMay
    March 20, 2007

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    I think there should be a part two to this. I want to know what the faery godmother told her. The idea behind this was sweet and I thought the rhyming was effective. Keep writing, Meggh xxxxxxxxxxxx

  • Ontarah
    March 13, 2007

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    I also always wanted to ask why fairies never let the toads dance at those merry gatherings. They always have to sit on mushrooms in the back and make toadstools. lol This is a nice poem with a great flow and it makes you really think about stodgy and unimaginative people can be sometimes. We forget about fairies and unicorns when we would do well to open our minds and have some fun. Great write.

  • Lady Altheia
    March 2, 2007

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    Thuis is a wonderful fairy story. Congrats on your bronze. I like to know about the fairy race and why they didn't get along with other races.

  • beyondsonic
    February 14, 2007

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    Nice!

    Awsome write! beautiful meter and rhyme, the rythem flows elegently... Perfectly sums up the classic veiw of the fairy!


  • Bethany Rose
    January 30, 2007
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    The flow is good and the rhyme is also well done, and doesn't sound forced. It paints a beautiful picture, and is very cute, but it has a little too much repition. All in all excellent write. Good luck in all you do-Bethany

  • Dspiritsong gold member
    January 23, 2007

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    Excellent

    I love fantasy Fairy/Faery poems. I hope you won in the contest... I love the Judy Garland pictures too. This is my kind of poem...from start to finish. Dee


  • freespirit51 gold member
    January 4, 2007

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    Beautiful fantasy. I can imagine the little faery asking all these questions. But I have one question. What was the Godmothers answer to the little faery?

  • Firewelder27
    December 22, 2006
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    very awesome...Fantsastic write happy yule blessed be
    Darkangel


  • Shacadia Shay
    December 17, 2006
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    this is really sweet, i think it was written well.
    --Blessed be--
    Bradhadair


  • hollywood. silver member
    December 11, 2006
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    I love it! I also love the picture too.
    smooshes!
    -Tink-

  • azure85 gold member
    December 9, 2006

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    So pretty a poem and your graphic is just gorgeous! All those wonderful secrets to know and share, I like how you had the beginning lines all questions!

    Smooshes,

    Moonshine Pixie

  • whatstheuse
    December 7, 2006
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    my fantasy

    i love fantasy. this was a good write. keep up the good work


  • February Moon gold member
    October 19, 2006
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    Thank you for putting up such a wonderfully kindhearted contest.

  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    October 19, 2006
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    This was simply adorable. And still left to the imagination of the readers, young and young at heart. Smiles for sure will come from this. Thank you for participating in my project.

    Storm

  • Dream Priestess
    September 20, 2006
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    Wonderfull! Thanks for entering it
    Edited on Sep 20, 5:46 p.m. because 'to thank them'.

  • dark raindrop
    August 31, 2006
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    This is an awesome poem. I really enjoyed this. And I like how you used the old way to spell Faery!!!

    Blessed Be

  • February Moon gold member
    August 6, 2006
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    Thanks.

  • Heartofacircle
    July 31, 2006
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    aaww an understanding about fearies. well done. and I felt some good rhymes and rhythmns here. thanks for sharing this piece, keep up the awesome poetry and best of luck in my contest.

  • February Moon gold member
    July 19, 2006
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    Thanks.

  • wings of an angel
    July 19, 2006
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    this is a very good write that you had penned here good luck in our contest

  • rexi and eso
    May 31, 2006
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    I like how you left It open for discusion, it think it holds water better than if made it longer and went on to tell us all the secrets. Im left to imagine, thanks!

  • stevens5613
    May 19, 2006
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    wow this is a nice poem tho i am soryr but i did find one fault which is the rhyming scheme when it comes to
    "Why they could use magic while humans could not?
    Why they had much gentler words and thoughts?"
    yuo may want to think about the rhyming of them again. but apart from that it is an amazing poem and very detalic and true. goo dpoem

  • DavidTennantRocks silver member
    May 6, 2006
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    This is such a sweet pixie poem. Brought a big smile to my face. I think we would all ask such questions. I know I would. Keep up the awesome poetry!!! Thank you for entering my contest.
  • Raye Soleanna
    March 9, 2006
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    You know what, I enjoyed this. I think some of those questions I would ask to. Might I reccommend the book, "The Faery Reel". It might appeal to you. ^-^ I thought this was cute, and the little rhyming was nicely done. Good write!

  • Meleth
    March 7, 2006
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    Amazing!

    This is very good! I love the flow and rhyme! I've always been fond of faeries, and this is wonderful! Amazing job! Thanks for entering and good luck!

    ♥Somegirl1110♥ (Sarah/Meleth/Saramel)
  • PoOl Of EtErNiTy
    February 28, 2006
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    awww, this was cute, and i liked how it all flowed together, i was a little disppointed that you didnt tell me who the secrets were, but i was hanging on to my seat, so thats good, thanks for entering the contest and good luck

  • -echos lament-
    February 21, 2006
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    you are mosst very welcome

  • -echos lament-
    February 21, 2006
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    awww this is so cute! nice write!

  • Ethereal One gold member
    February 21, 2006
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    very well written

    This is such a cute story. I enjoyed reading this.

    etherealforu

  • StoneLion
    February 21, 2006
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    I like it! Pixitastic!
  • Ir.muse
    February 21, 2006
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    This is a wonderful pixie poem.I love it.
    Shahrzad

  • Iohagh
    February 14, 2006
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    I love it. Pixielicious
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