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Fireflies

There, gazing upon
The fireflies of nightfall
Tender wings blossom

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Written February 14th, 2006

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  • peluche
    February 14, 2006
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    This is beautiful. It has a sensual elemnt to it. It leaves the reader feeling peaceful and serne. I know a haiku is supposed to be profound revelation, right?? I know the count is 5-7-5. So at least I know something