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Times of green

Remember the hills we used to roam
Remember the plains we used to run

Think about the grass so green
Think about the clear blue stream

A land blessed by god
Natures true pride

This land be untamed and left untouched
Not yet found by mans greedy lust

This land so pure and full of life
Not yet befallen by an evil plit

So remember this time of beauty green
Remember this time of peaceful tranquility


Hope it stays and lasts the years
For mans reach grows ever near

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just writeing
Written February 13th, 2006

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  • The Midnight Sun
    February 14, 2006
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    Good

    i like this how man dominants the world and ruins such beauty just for are own wants and if thats not what u meant then i got a different point from it well good job and keep it up.


  • ShelleyA gold member
    February 14, 2006
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    A very nice write. Good imagery and flow. You painted a beautiful word picture. A soothing piece. Well crafted and a most enjoyable read.

    ShelleyA