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flow of charge



glancing across the blank
i realized i'd yet to write the text of a poem. blame homework.



so now you know why electrical conductivity is important
and how orbitals overlap

and what resistance is.




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Written February 13th, 2006

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  • Marigolds
    March 9, 2006
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    I don't know, it was kind of "spur-of-the-moment" and I think perhaps not flushed out enough... It shouldn't be too sciency to make at least a bit of sense... maybe I'll edit. Maybe I'll just leave it alone.

  • Cyan314
    February 28, 2006
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    I like the end of this (the last stanza, i guess you would call it), although it's connection to the first stanza is dubious... Maybe I have to know more about electrical conductivity and such to "get" it?