You and Me
Two different people
Conjoined by online love
How can this be
The difference in us
Is age
And that's a problem
I cant see us being apart
Your always on my mind
When I think of you
You'll see a smile on my face
I hunger for your love
Your touch
Your kiss
The way you will hold me
Laying in bed
Wishing you were there
Snuggling up to me
Keeping me warm
Keeping my heart safe
In the Mornings
I wanna wake up to your face
Kiss you gently
And make breakfast
Is this wired to be in love
With someone not even your age?
Im only sixteen
Your alot older than that
But for some reason I cant hide
These feelings of mine
They just burn my heart into ashes
I have to let you know
I'm falling for you
Is that somthing I should do?
For someone so younger than you
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Written February 13th, 2006
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age is a problem but you cant help who you love. good job sis. keep up the work.
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wow, hold on!..beware th on-line romance..there is "many" a bear in the woods, know what I mean.that's not to say there is no good people out there, cause there is, 4 sure...I'm just saying be careful that's all, expecially if he's alot older, that's all..To do with your poem here, it's only me, but I couldn't help feeling like you were indirectly asking the reader for advice with this! Hope you stop by my spot again sometime...I have some new ones i think you may like.Stay safe.
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i love this girl. she's great, to say the lea
i would say, a big, fat YES. but...that's just my humble opinion. love is love. friendship is friendship. and it's all so beautiful. transcends time and space. love your love and don't let anyone stand in your way. as to your piece here...i'm just a hack-amateur, so i can't really critique it. but, ...beautifully written in my humble opinion. you have so much talent...in so many areas. i wish i had the same. you're a wonderful addition to this site...and to the art world in general. i love your love of life and enthusiasm. i love everything i've read of yours...and please forgive me for not comm more often. so much programmig and work to do and now...i have an injured eye...it's so painful, i can barely see. don't know what's wrong. anyway, never mind about me. just...we love ya, babe. keep going. happy valentiens day..i'd send you some flowers..but i'm sure you've got tons of admirerers doing that anyway. plus..don't know where you live...so ...flowers from my heart. hugs and love... -encore-
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