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Die

i cant stand your looks
i fucking hate your heartless eyes
your a fake
and sometimes that makes me cry
your alone and always well be
useless
worthless
you have no meaning
i hope that makes you cry
your nothing
cut your self
i hope it bleeds
cut you throat
so you cant fucking breath
DIE  
i hope you
DIE
DIE
DIE
i cant take your breath
you heart beat gives me head aches
i don't want you to more
i wish for your death late at night
i cant fix this
but i can kill you
i want you to
DIE


i want to tell you good bye  

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Written February 13th, 2006

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  • neVerAgain
    March 31, 2006
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    That is a really good poem! I like it a lot! Hate can be a really good thing because that is a great poem


  • silenced soul
    February 14, 2006
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    luv ya

    this was really good stasier is it for any body certain?huh should i be scared lol j/k I LOVE YOU neways u didnt tell me you updated you need to tell me these things so i can comment well yeah this was really good i liked it alot great job love you lots ~lissa~


  • MisJudged
    February 14, 2006
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    oooh stasia! i likie!!! This is AWESOME! but only cuz i can relate *ruben fucking bitch ass mother fucker hiding behind your booze* *twigz fucking bastard, telling my own boyfriend i'm a whore* *megan you fucking bitch ass slut, you puked your heart out you whore!!* *Samantha, you wanted to press charges for harrasment, i havent even began to harrass you yet*
    But yeha, I can really relate. I liked this alot!! Well talk to you later. Love you lots!
    Bye


  • myselfinthemaking
    February 13, 2006
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    Well, this is a violent poem. But good to write it instead of do it, but it still can suck to feel this way. But it made a good poem. Keep writing.

  • scoobyshroom
    February 13, 2006
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    Hate can be a beautiful thing nice poem...

  • babygurl1014
    February 13, 2006
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    wow i guess u really hate that person but nice poem love keisha

  • xcrystalx
    February 13, 2006
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    well u defintely hate someone but good poem

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