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Intricate Ballet

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Rhythmic muse follows your eyes,
In the only dance that counts.
Where erotic soul meets spiritual goal,
Freedom Dances between succumbing...ecstasies.

 

A somatic sensation of serene belonging 
it's a violin life, strings unioned in singular sonata.
I feel you everywhere, in everything lovely,
and sense the sacred fingers of God quietly tuning our euphonic sighs.

 

'Living in the mystery' of this affliction of affection,
Forever singing the sacred “yes’, welcomed like a favorite song.
Understanding in alertness, but not alert to understanding (we’re just being).
Dwelling in timeless moments, the endless, enveloping ‘now’.

 

Protective breezes, leaves of Aspen dancing in the night,
Oh, h-h-h-heaven took a heavenly pallet and painted my heart with your name all over it.
Unwavering, focused quiver moves to a finer love,
Great Garden River of Life bares its silent, breathless listening.

 

Exquisite flowers cultivating steps, fragrant like water-prayers,
Rippling, twirling, tongue water-wheel French kisses wild calm.
Intimate, exquisite, intricate ballet, appeal of transfixed reasonance,
En thusi ASM, like hypnotic dreaming, (laughter) this path has heart!

 

A siren of intriguing clarity knows facts without sobriety are useless,
And wisdom with no kindness is futile”
Hence, as ee cummings wrote, “kisses are a better fate than wisdom.”
Untrapped animals with luminous voices lighting up the night.

 

Survival and surrender, sublime passions,
The very atmosphere bends into unfickle beauty.
Restless, eager waves taste and tickle the sensual shore of
Alternative healing.

Author notes

Wanted to write something for Valentine's Day.
Written February 13th, 2006

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  • raggyann
    December 27, 2007
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    this is perfection
    absolute perfection
    beautifuly done


    • Timothy Cameron gold member
      December 27, 2007
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      Again, RaggyAnn, Thanks!

      This one was a soul dance for me, and carries deep meaning & memory with it. It's been almost one year since anyone read it. Thank you very much.


  • Dalaney gold member
    December 31, 2006

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    You have taken my breath away with this
    beautifully written piece...It feels so
    dreamy. Now...listen to me sigh....
    Lane


  • February 25, 2006
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    Man, this is powerful.


  • Timothy Cameron gold member
    February 21, 2006
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    I think you probably figured out you are welcomed there. LOL! However, If you find me there, let me know.


  • Redstormy gold member
    February 21, 2006
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    May I walk around in your mind for awhile?... this is amazing.

    Red


  • Gwenevere
    February 17, 2006
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    Well this was amazing.Such description.a fire within a soul.What more can I say, Ros


  • Lyrical Soul silver member
    February 16, 2006
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    Timothy this is so beautiful. I'm sorry I haven't gotten by here before now but wow, this was worth the wait. Simply soothing and passion filled. I love the line, "The very atmosphere bends into our beauty." Now that is passion. Well done my friend. Simply gorgeous!!

    ~Lyrical

  • Timothy Cameron gold member
    February 16, 2006
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    It must have pleased you to hear about the protective breezes, too, perhaps? :-) Thanks for the applause and comment.


  • LovesWithTheBreeze
    February 15, 2006
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    trying to put into words the feelings that i walked away with after reading this poem are incredibly hard! I can try to sum it up by saying, breathtaking, beautiful, captivating, mesmerizing, just incredible. This definitely was one of the best writes Ive read in a long time and my shallow words do it no justice. Well done!! Absolute perfection!

  • Lord Gegishov
    February 15, 2006
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    somatic sensation of serene belonging
    it's a violin life, strings unioned in singular sonata.
    I feel you everywhere, in everything lovely,
    and sense the sacred fingers of God quietly tuning our euphonic sighs

    The picture preceeding the poem is fantastic-- almost a "Salome Dancing," even! HOwever, this stanza (and the rest of the poem) is what stands out to me the mot! It is passionate and sweet. Keep up the great work!


  • sassythang
    February 14, 2006
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    maybe its just me but t hat picture won me and my heart ur writing even better u got talent keep it up:0

  • Timothy Cameron gold member
    February 14, 2006
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    Such a welcome comment to hear. I worked on this poem for a good eight hours...rewrote it twenty times after I "finished" it. LOL! I feel the version you read is what I was really trying to say, so I am glad you said what you said...THANK YOU. I really want to learn to write heartfelt poetry and you have just encouraged that endeavor.
    I hope to make today a better day than I first envisioned and I credit you for that. :-) I hope we grow closer today. I'll let you know...LOL!
    Peace Through Love,
    Timothy


  • Lionslove silver member
    February 14, 2006
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    TREMENDOUS!!!!

    WOW....when i read work like this, i understand and accept more readily, the reasons why i haven' even won one trophy. for what it's worth from a hack amateur like me, this has, even within the first stanza, just left me awestruck. i wish i had your talent.

    I loved all of it, but i loved this line, : "I feel you everywhere, in everything lovely,
    and sense the sacred fingers of God quietly tuning our euphonic sighs."

    you are truly gifted and a gift to us all. happy valentines day. may the music (which this poem is to me..just a symphony almost of love) of your valentines day, reflect this. all the best to you, and i apologize for not gettiing to more of your work sooner. i alway meant to , but i have so much programming to do...and now...(laughing) and injured right eye..it's so painful, i can barely see this screeen right now. all the best again. and thank you for this ... -encore-


  • cherche -d -ame
    February 14, 2006
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    thank you for dancing, for the violins and for a very metaphoric yet enchanting write. I chose only to look at the enchanting part today<---as it is after all Valentine's day. As a matter of fact about halfway through, I was struck by"hmmm...this would be a great valentine's write. So I purposelly chose to ignore what I think is a bit of underlying pathos
    Happy Day to you,
    xoxoxo
    reenie

  • ecrivain01
    February 13, 2006
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    Of course it didn't offend me. However, it's long and it would take a long time to thoroughly comment on it. Some of the lines are awkward and I'd have to go through it several times to try to get the meaning from it. It's simply more than I'm up for tonight.


  • Timothy Cameron gold member
    February 13, 2006
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    Thank you...I'm just glad it didn't offend you.

  • Timothy Cameron gold member
    February 13, 2006
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    Thank you very much. A fate without kisses...who needs wisdom if we can't get kissed ? LOL! Thanks for the comment and applause.

  • ecrivain01
    February 13, 2006
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    I can't say much about this, but I'll applaud it since I clicked on it.

  • vieroulette
    February 13, 2006
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    i don't know what to say but first i really like your poem, like the line"kisses are a better fate than wisdom". it really inspired me as if i could kind of i know this is weird, but like i could understand it. it's real good!


  • Mizzundaztood gold member
    February 13, 2006
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    Beautiful! Absolutely beautiful! I love the way it just flows to the nest line...even from stanza to sranza! it's a very hard thing to do, and you've mastered it quite perfectly in this peice!
    Evie


  • Timothy Cameron gold member
    February 13, 2006
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    Thank you very much and I'm glad a few people like ee cummings. His poetry changed my life.


  • tryst 1
    February 13, 2006
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    i love the fact that you included ee "cummings" at the climax of the poem...very tongue in cheek... i love these lines: "luminous voices lighting up the night" and "Great Garden River of Life, bears its silent, breathless listening" and the "tongue water-wheel French kisses" ...so evocative..i knew just what you meant. very enjoyable.

  • luvdrkchocolate
    February 13, 2006
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    Wow! LOL I don't know if I was following this the complete way or not but it seemed very much like you were enjoying yourself! Kind of reminded me of a couple of young hot blooded things, running through the trees under the moonlight, holding hands and laughing and kissing.. and getting all naughty! LOL This was great. Very romantic and perfect for Valentine's Day that's just about on us now! I've been reading as many as I can to get myself in the mood. So thanks for sharing!


  • grannyeri gold member
    February 13, 2006
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    Such and intricate ballet tyou have penned for us here - sharing this dance through the sensual and expressive words you have used. Lovely picture as well.

  • sigrun odinsdottir
    February 13, 2006
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    I LOVE IT!

    Happy Valentine's Day, and oh, this is sublime. Absolutely gorgeous.

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