With one click of send
I can't pretend
That your just a friend
Is there no end
All the time I spend
Writing one email to more than just a friend
Love is hard to express
I hope this isnt a mess
This heart of mine has to confess
With every letter I press
It gives me stress
Valentines day is coming soon
That same old tune
I just wanna fly away like a balloon
Maybe once and a blue moon
I find love
It hurts cause I loved you so much
But I cant even feel one touch
Just by email and such
Is this real love
When we talk do we fly like a dove
Now I can think the Lord above
For such wonderful love
Only by email
I hope this dont fale
Please let this prevail
Is this what you call
Email love?
Author notes
Written February 13th, 2006
A contest entry
- VaLenTine'S DaY (spEnD It wIth SoMEone wHo CaREs) by in-love-with-you.
300 points, ended February 16, 2006, 5 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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thorougly enjoyable
i'm not a critic..just an amateur...but, i loved what you did here, my friend. i'm no one to say or judge, but....i totally agree with darkbabe...you have this talent within...and , if you ever stop writimg....it would be a crime. you're a gift to us all. please keep loving us with your writes. just wonderful.... -
yea tj its about me lol
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Wonderful just like britt said. its wired how love hits you and it hits hard. and i know alot of ppl who have been in love online so its nothing to worry about but yea i can see how you made this girl feel sad cause she didnt get to be with him only through email. good job.
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This is wonderful. I like this part..
"All the time I spend
Writing one email to more than just a friend"
and this one...
"This heart of mine has to confess"
This is wonderful. Hope you keep up the good work Stacy.
Your really good. Remeber what I told you.. you have to look deepwithin your self to find poetry. This is poetry. You did a wonderful wonderul job at this. Good luck in the contest. If you dont win they are crazy lol. But this is wonderful. Good job
Britt Brat
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