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My Valentine~

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My Valentine~

Valentine Day-Paul McCartney
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You're my Lovebird of loyalty
I've been struck by Cupid's arrow
Love Knots circle forevermore
Where yesterday ties tomorrow

Chocolate wrapped homemade candy
All heart filled dreams of sweet romance
Victorian valentine cards
Delightful walks in Paris, France

Gorgeous roses caress the soul
In true love I see us flourish
So to you my precious angel
It is you I'll always cherish

-poeticweaver
-angeleyes711  



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Thanks for reading us two~ Divine love and tenderness to all of you~
Written February 13th, 2006

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  • poeticweaver gold member
    September 8, 2006
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    Such a sweet time we have had in the past when we rewind the divine times, each poetic line, I always love penning with you, thanks for being you always, today, and once upon a time in our yesterdays, I love you so, down our long and winding road, ensoul, never shall I forget you, for all time, my sweet soul, my Valentine.


  • HeartRocker
    February 21, 2006
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    i like it it is fild with a lot of love i like it very much well good job and keep up the writting


  • aikokimi
    February 19, 2006
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    This poem is so romantic. Wonderful stuff!


  • xxunloved07xx
    February 18, 2006
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    WOW this was a really really great poem and you are a grreat writer and its one of the best poems ive read keep up the awesomly awesome work and thanks for sharing with all of us on allpoetry.

    ~*!Heather!*~


  • K1r5ty
    February 18, 2006
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    very sweet and nicely put together. well done!!!


  • bleedingmascara
    February 17, 2006
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    Wow, this is pretty, I'm Chelsea from Corsicana, TX. I'm just writing this, so when I search on google, my name will pop up!!! I hate Clay Milling, so if you see this, I hope u die!!!

  • lil-miss-tash
    February 17, 2006
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    HEY WOW THIS IS A REALLY NICE WRITE BEAUTIFUL AND SWEET I HAVE NOT READ A PEOM LIKE THIS YOU HAVE A GIFT KEEP ON WRITTING I CANT WAIT TO READ MORE OF YOUR POEMS. KEEP ON WRITTING. TASH

  • Liz45601
    February 16, 2006
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    wow that is buetiful and great grafics


  • skullmountain
    February 16, 2006
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    awesum poem loved the background, its so beautiful and loving. I have realy enjoyed reading it, thank you for sharing it with us all. xxxxxxxxx

  • poeticweaver gold member
    February 15, 2006
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    Thanks for reading us, I'm glad you enjoyed,
    you're great!


  • irene plunkett
    February 14, 2006
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    this is a beautiful loving poem keep it up


  • February 14, 2006
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    it's sooo cuuuuuuuuuute! I lovvvved it...i wish that could apply for me! Swwweeet and savory memories to cherish her forever and always...love it!


  • xXxbecca10o8o7xXx
    February 14, 2006
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    really good poem keep it up babe!!! thanx for sharing this with all of us here at allpoetry i really enjoyed the read
    love ya
    ~~*becca*~~
    ziez
    you are a great writer and this was a great write!!!!!!!
    keep up the great and awesumly awesum work!!!!!!!!


  • Analai
    February 14, 2006
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    A very sweet poem, and gorgous background.

  • Thedragonisgone
    February 14, 2006
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    Sweet memories described here. It sounds like your Valentines day has gone well. take care.


  • HollyScissorHands
    February 14, 2006
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    Nice job! very put together. Happy Valentines Day keep up the great work!


  • misticmoonlite gold member
    February 14, 2006
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    WoW this is gorgeous.. wonderful background..and poem is excellent entwined.. love it keep up the great work you two..
    Linda

  • karabi
    February 14, 2006
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    Very good

    One of the sweetest pieces I have come across on this site. It makes you feel happy and glad.


  • HeartTangles
    February 14, 2006
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    Beautiful graphics displayed for this intriguing poem. Very nicely written. This lookd like a victorian valentine.


  • BeAuT1FuLlyXxBrOkEn
    February 14, 2006
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    I really love the background to this poem-its really beautiful. This was a very beautifully written poem, you did an amazing job. Keep up the good work, and thanks so much for sharing this wonderful write!!!!!!!!!!


  • February 14, 2006
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    just absolutley gorgoues!

    keep it up
    TEOT xxx


  • mynameishoneybee
    February 14, 2006
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    i love this line :: love knots circle forevermore. and beautiful background. well written. great job. hugs to you!

  • gbo
    February 14, 2006
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    awwww this is adorable!! i love the "lovebird of loyalty" not only alliteration but a perfect metaphor for this poem!! i also like the line "Love Knots circle forevermore" such a beautiful line!!! you use many literary techniques and it works extremely well for this poem!! very very awesome!!! i love it!!


  • Forgotten Anomaly
    February 14, 2006
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    Lovely it was great keep writing.


  • lost-and-confused
    February 14, 2006
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    aww.. that's swet! ~Jamie


  • LeeStone
    February 14, 2006
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    This has a very old world sort of feel to it, like one of the great poets of old. Very beautifully written. I enjoyed it very much.

    ~ Lee Stone


  • poeticweaver gold member
    February 14, 2006
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    Thanks for commenting, glad you enjoyed, thanks for reading us, Happy Valentine's Day!


  • williamstown silver member
    February 14, 2006
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    Overall a beutiful piece of work

    I loved the background you have chosen, ithas an olde worlde charm about it, a reminder of Victorian times when alentine cards started, and were so ornate. And by the way your wording was good also.


  • Poetic-Goddess
    February 14, 2006
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    This so sweet and romantic!!!
    And I love the layout!!!


  • q-pid
    February 14, 2006
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    Great job. I love the wording. It flows so beautifully. I really look forward to reading many more of your poems. Great write!


  • Little Blue Bird
    February 14, 2006
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    Very Romantic, Good write!

    This is so nice! I like it a lot. Very romantic.


  • wings of an angel
    February 14, 2006
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    great write angel eyes, I love your background for this piece as well brings out the poem, beautifully penned...Keep smiling

  • Reflected Light
    February 14, 2006
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    Aw, that's really cute! Nice vocabulary and also a gorgeous layout. Well done.


  • thegoldenpen
    February 14, 2006
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    Great write! I enjoyed reading this. I love the imagery you use. Keep up the good work.


  • Mark Rickerby gold member
    February 14, 2006
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    Very nice poem and presentation. Happy Valentine's Day!

    Mark

  • crystallove
    February 14, 2006
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    This is a beautiful poem. So sweet and inncoent filled with love and tenderness.Amazing all the way. I love valentines day and you give a beautiful poem.
    This poem was very touching and a great show of love for two.
    Great Poem thanks for the read and keep penning.


  • brokenbeauty921
    February 14, 2006
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    This is a great write. I really liked reading this, and I liked the style you picked to write in. It was really adorable, and I loved how there was so much emotion and detail, even though it was one of the shorter poems I've read. It really showed how you felt when you wrote this, and I think it's great when someone can put their feelings down on paper, and have it come out so beautifully.
    Elyse


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    February 14, 2006
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    Absolutely gorgeous, you two! The awesome poetry that comes from your two pens just takes my breath away! Thank you for sharing and making me think of the one I love; this is awesome

  • sad-but-true
    February 14, 2006
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    Wow! When you two get together the beautiful songs of poetic words just come running from you don't they! This was simply wonderful and I really enjoyed this from you two. I mean I love reading you two seperately but together you really know how to capture a feeling. Exceptional piece of work. ~val~

  • faiza
    February 14, 2006
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    very nice.

    this could be a beautiful Valentine gift. nice work.

  • Miyako777
    February 13, 2006
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    I liked that one, I love the way you choosed the words...it's very cute...It reminds me that I should write one for my boyfriend...I am not that good in it though...but you gave me inspiration..thanx


  • amanda-rose
    February 13, 2006
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    cuteee

    this puts an awesome twist on valentines day. i love it.


  • LovesWithTheBreeze
    February 13, 2006
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    aww very sweet. perfect mood setting for valentines day. a special day for me....this year it is my 10th anniversary and this just put me in that head over heels again state of mind. thanks....

  • Gold3nP3n
    February 13, 2006
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    I think what seperates this poem from great to spectacular is the background, it just adds so much meaning to the piece, its unbelievable. Nice write, there is definately mucho talent here.
    with a soul of fire and a heart of ice,
    y2shaggy


  • Mascaraed Beauty
    February 13, 2006
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    Romantic

    Wow, so romantic, i love it!


  • bludstaindsoliloquy
    February 13, 2006
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    See . . . now this was a veri sweet . . . positive piece. Full of love. The opening graphic and the rosie background also add quite an asthetic effect to the piece. Well written! Keep penning and keep sharing!

    ~~Maggie


  • Yunalonei
    February 13, 2006
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    This is a beautiful poem. So sweet and inncoent filled with love and tenderness. Not that im big on love or valentines day
    This poem was very touching and a great show of love for the two of you.
    Great Poem
    XxX


  • PrincessOfFire
    February 13, 2006
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    Your words are very artistic. They create constant images in the readers mind while leaving such a beautiful feeling of love.
    Great talent you too!
    Rose


  • SirensSong
    February 13, 2006
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    i can feel valentines day thurough this poem


  • Wolf Demon Goddess
    February 13, 2006
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    I really like this poem keep up the good work

  • ashlee black
    February 13, 2006
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    excellent

    Iam not relly into romance right now but good work i relly like it. It was sweet and cute. almost made me cry lol

  • kaylamegdos
    February 13, 2006
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    I'm not sure any of my comments would create a stir of happiness in you. The imagery you created is good and the memories just kind of fly by as you create the candy and the knots of love. i've never been in love, but it seems like something cool.

  • Yvette Champ gold member
    February 13, 2006
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    I really liked the phrase " You are my lovebird of loyalty" this was great,enjoyed it`s sweetness and warmth,

  • tashathejoo
    February 13, 2006
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    good

    This is written very well. Whoever this was written for must feel very loved. I like the style of this poem. You are both great poets! Great background too.


  • HisxGirl
    February 13, 2006
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    aweosme


  • The Midnight Sun
    February 13, 2006
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    Good

    awww so sweet and love the mix with the music its great well once again another great job keep up the work.


  • robert bolin
    February 13, 2006
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    I agree this would make be an awsome poem on a Valentines day card this freakn rocks the picture the words damn brilliant and heart touching all in one thank you for allowing me to read and comment on your work and thanks for sharring your work with me..

  • Buchan
    February 13, 2006
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    excellent

    Excellent words and expressions.I found it a very talented poem.Thank you for sharing and writing.Happy valentines day.


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    February 13, 2006
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    It is just travel of the magical words for the love and bringing the light of the ertrnity through the sentimental words here in this poem through and through too.The thoughts are very pleasant and very meningfuly touching the depth of this great nature ..The flow of this write is very impressive and just to the point too.I really appreciate this work..prabhudayal khattar

  • TrishaMarie
    February 13, 2006
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    this is the side of valentines day tht everyone should see...not the commercial crap but this, love at it's finest. Great write..
    Trish

  • darkest-princess
    February 13, 2006
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    perfect

    wow i found this quite nice to read it flows nicely and is brilliantly written keep up the outstanding work i look forward to reading things by you again

  • luvdrkchocolate
    February 13, 2006
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    Well, I'm nothing if not in the mood to read love poetry tonight! I saw bring it on! And this piece is just as sweet as they come, complete with mounds of sugar and ooey gooey chocolate ozzing down. You two sound like cupid's got a big fat arrow sticking out of your ass... LOL Too much! I think you guys gave me a tooth ache. And you guys worked together on this? This is great work! Thanks for a great Valentine's Day poem!


  • Almighty Aphrodite gold member
    February 13, 2006
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    At this very moment, I am not the greatest fan of love or of Valentine's Day--since I'm alone every year, it seems--but this is a beauteous invocation of love and adoration. I wish that I could find something remotely close to this, but as of yet, unfortunately... (sigh) I have seen a lot of love poems lately which seem to be assaulting me at every turn...this is fabulous. I wish you two all the best.

    Many blessings,

    Raven Aurora


  • Viyanna Rosemarie silver member
    February 13, 2006
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    timothy, timothy, timothy---how can i keep on hating the name when you keep giving these beautiful poems for me to read. you have done it again--i may not always cringe when i hear that name--thanks to you and your son. you really should make this one into a card. viyanna r langager


  • Faded silver member
    February 13, 2006
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    Now this belongs on a greeting card, doesn't it? Wonderfully smooshy to capture the valentines mood gripping Allpoetry at the moment!
    Love the background too
    ~Faded


  • poeticweaver gold member
    February 13, 2006
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    Lovely!!!

    Is this not the best, no matter what time of day, you are sending your love my way, thanks hun, I enjoy sharing my ink with you any time, for you love with the power of the sun, and you draw the power of love from the divine! Happy Valentine's Day sweet soul!

    -Timothy The Poetic Weaver~

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