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she opened her eyes

she opened her eyes,
and stared at the world in front of her,
she was empty now,
nothing but pain filled her heart,
frightened eyes landed on everything,
what had this world come to,
dist ruction,
murder,
suicide,
were everywhere,
leaving traces of pained souls,
souls just like hers,
a soul torn and shredded,
her heart bleed her own blood,
deadly fire surrounded her,
her screams were in vain,
it pained her to move,
her burns to severe,
those souls,
those evil souls,
had set fire to a pained souls home,
laughing at her screams of terror,
and smiling gleefully when her soul rose,
rose to touch a blood red sky and disappear,
she will never open her eyes again,
for she will forever live in fear.

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Written February 13th, 2006

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  • mcsquiggles
    July 11, 2006
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    lol

    LOL your sad and need to get away from the emo monster lol


  • x CheepPurfume
    February 13, 2006
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    Wow. Very emotional..and very deep. I really liked a lot. Amazing, job! Keep up the amazing work! This poem is what real poetry is about! hehe
    Tori