Tomorrow is the day
The most loved day of all
Tomorrow is
Valentines Day
The day I get to spend with you
Tomorrow is anticipated the most
For you I'd do anything
Tomorrow is so close
Yet so far
My patience is growing thin
I am so hyper,
I cannot win
Tomorrow is the day,
What else is there to say?
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Written February 13th, 2006
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BOOOO. This blew hard.
Not just because you sound like a very clingy person.
Not just because you seem like you would stab your Valentine.
Not just because the poem had absolutely no flow.
Not just because the poem was very unoriginal.
Not just because you sound like you'd have to be pried off of whoever it is with a crow bar and promises of marshmellow treats, or that you seem like you'd be sticky if someone touched you.
It just blew. Because there are thirty million other writings out there, shorter or longer, that are better than this, and have the SAME MEANING, and alot of them have the SAME WORDING and alot of them blow just as much, except this is worse.
And not just because you sound like you're 13 and this is your first Valentines day with a boyfriend that you've been with for a week and you haven't seen in 3 days and you're just DYING to see him, because oh my god, thats such a long time.
Actually, yeah, it sucks for all those reasons. But not just because.
M
Edited on May 11, 4:30 p.m. because ''. -
aww this is very sweet. I wish i was as excited as you are right now. I cant see the person i love. It sucks not having somebody on Valentines day that means as much as to you as you do to them. I love this write. I hope you have a great day tomorrow.nice job.Keep it up! check out some of my writes?
-karen
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