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Dear Valentine

[Roses are red,
violets are blue]
Screw off, already
I don't need you.

[Roses are red,
violets are blue]
But sometimes I wonder
what you're up to.

[Roses are red,
violets are blue]
I still can't believe
all that you said.

[Roses are red,
violets are blue]
I'm fighting the urge
to get down and beg.

[Roses are red,
violets are blue]
I hate what you do to me
in love's cute name.

[Roses are dead,
violets won't bloom]
I still want and need you
but not the silly game.

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cupid can kiss my ass.
Written February 13th, 2006

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  • rindomai
    May 18, 2006
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    thanks


  • starsandmoonshine
    May 18, 2006
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    thats was funny lol



  • rindomai
    March 17, 2006
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    haha cute. seems i didnt totally let you down, huh?


  • Rele anmwe
    March 17, 2006
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    Roses are red
    Violets are blue
    You are so fine
    my heart is singing for you

    Roses are red
    Violets are blue
    I don't know you well
    But I wish to know all about you

    Roses are red
    Violets are blue
    If you give me a chance
    I'll always treasure you

    Roses are red
    Violets are blue
    Screw off, already
    I need to start anew

    Roses are red
    Violets are blue
    My eyes are lost,
    in the crowd, I'm searching for you

  • rindomai
    February 21, 2006
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    thanks and well put! "sometimes we hate to love and sometimes we love to hate". heh. and very true... as hard as it is, i'm very thankful for the chance to love and be loved like that at all aw youre not rambling lol. thanks


  • Andy Stephenson
    February 20, 2006
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    I clever idea and you applied it well. Sometimes we hate to love and sometimes we love to hate. The hard thing is to keep loving through the pain, but it is a blessing that we can love and be loved. Anyway, as I ramble along here, what I mean to say is that this is a cute poem and I like it.

  • rindomai
    February 13, 2006
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    haha thanks... and yeah, i know. i dont usually have issues with valentines. but cupid was evil to me this year. i'd just as likely flick a dart his way as thank him. funny how so many things seem alike in relationships.


  • Shancy Fayre
    February 13, 2006
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    You go on, girl. This bites just right. (Until you give in.)
    I really really enjoyed this one. My mom is going through a situation with her boyfriend and this descibed just what she had been saying to me, earlier. I enjoyed it much. Shancy.


  • rindomai
    February 13, 2006
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    heheeh


  • Trenchmouth
    February 13, 2006
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    AMEN!! lol, i was laughing the whole time i read this and i totally agree with you. DEATH TO CUPID!
    s and s
    ~Kami


  • rindomai
    February 13, 2006
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    heh thanks


  • rindomai
    February 13, 2006
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    lol nah no worries. i'll join you in the clothes-less orgy


  • Melodies
    February 13, 2006
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    My gosh! You have done a clever thing with the old color theme! I didn't know it could be done, but you did it, poet person! Makes me want to try. I am laughing at what Magic Bullet said, above. I wish I'd thought of that. You guys are awesome.


  • Magic Bullet
    February 13, 2006
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    Damn, now I need to find a clean pair of underpants.

    :-)


  • rindomai
    February 13, 2006
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    well luckily kraft is good. count me in.


  • Magic Bullet
    February 13, 2006
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    The budget only scrapes to a pack of Kraft slices I'm afraid.
    Edited on Feb 13, 9:51 because ''.


  • rindomai
    February 13, 2006
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    ha nice. i may just have to. now the true question is... what KIND Of cheese.

  • Magic Bullet
    February 13, 2006
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    Hmm not looking forward to Valentines? You can join me in my specially created anti-valentines bunker if you want. I was going to dance around naked to punk music and eat cheese for breakfast, lunch and dinner but if you want to join me I'll put on some underpants.
    Edited on Feb 13, 9:48 because 'One of these _ instead of one of these -'.

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