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A Fantasy Weekend

We go to Amsterdam for a naughty weekend….your suggestion.  Once we’ve booked into a hotel and ‘settled’ in, we go out to find a nice restaurant and have a very nice relaxed meal.  After which, we go for a stroll along the canals heading back to the hotel.  It’s a warm night, so we stop off for a drink and do some people watching.  Then head back to the hotel, another drink in the bar and then off to our room.  Where, because it’s been a long day with all the travel etc. we make slow leisurely love and you fall asleep with your head on my chest.

The next day we try we do a bit of the cultural stuff, hey, it has to be done, you can’t visit a place and not see what it has to offer.
The day is all but over so again we head back to the hotel for a shower before going to look for another restaurant.  As soon as we’re back you dive in the shower first……but I follow you in and we shower together.  I soap your body, and scrub your back and kiss the back of your neck and down your spine.  I massage soap into your breasts and your nipples get very hard very quickly.  I continue massaging your breasts and kissing your neck and back, my manhood is pressing into the crack of your bum and you grind your hips against it.  You are really hot and horny and your legs part slightly.  You reach behind and guide ‘me’ between your legs, but not inside you.  I thrust my throbbing cock between your legs, sliding it along your wet pussy lips, which are now swollen with excitement.  Your nipples are like bullets as I continue caressing and teasing them.  You are on the verge of orgasm and you want my cock inside you, but I tell not yet.    ………………………….

You are almost there….I reach behind me and take the shower head down and direct the spray over your pussy.  You start to complain, but the sensations of the hot water on your pussy lips is, far better than you expected.  I use my other hand to stroke your pussy, gently sliding my fingers up and down the length of your tender swollen lips.  I use two fingers to part your lips slightly and direct the spray directly onto your luv bud, which is now as hard as your nipples.  You are not expecting the sensations that erupt within your wet juicy pussy, and you start to shudder as an orgasm overtakes you.

You press back against my throbbing cock between your legs and use a hand to hold against your pussy as you ride the wave of your orgasm.  I am still playing the jet of water across your luv bud and you start to come again, even more intensely, ‘til you can stand no more, literally and you sink to sit on the side of the bath.  You are amazed at how quickly you came and at the intensity of your orgasm.  We finish up in the shower and get ready to go out for dinner.

As you start to dress, I tell you not to bother putting your knickers on, I haven’t finished with you yet!

We go out in search of another nice restaurant and discover that we are in time to get a meal and to watch one of those big glamour shows.   The show turns out to be really entertaining and the meal is excellent.  The show is like a cabaret, ‘Moulin Rouge’
Style plenty of nudity, but nothing smutty.

It’s about 11.30pm when we leave, but the place is still buzzing.  We head off to find a bar for a couple of drinks, it’s still really warm, but there is a slight breeze.  After a few minutes walking you say that the breeze is starting to blow up your skirt and it’s really nice.  You are still horny even after two orgasms, but you still want my cock inside you.   I pull you into one of the side streets, a quick look about, and start to kiss you, softly, but passionately.  I slide my hand between your legs and up your inner thighs and my fingers stroke either side of your pussy for a minute or two, then slide a finger up your lips.  They are hot to the touch and I can feel your wetness starting to dampen your pubes.  You amaze me by being so ready to continue, out there in the street, so I slide a finger deep inside you.  That opened the flood gates and your juices really start to flow.  I am so tempted to take my cock out as you are squeezing it under my trousers, but someone starts down the street from the other end.  I take my hand away and let your skirt fall back into place.

I was going to continue kissing you and let the people pass before resuming, but another load start down the street, so we move off.  Around the next corner there is a little bar, so we sit by the canal and order a couple of cold beers.  The bar is busy so we end up sitting on the ground with our feet over the water.   You ‘arrhhh’ as the cool ground soothes your aching pussy.  You didn’t mean to be quite so verbal about it and feel a little embarrassed.  Thinking people around knew what you were ‘arrhhhing’ about, so as to cover up, you lift your foot and ask me to massage it for you.  I knowingly oblige, also knowingly I am looking right up your skirt at your glistening wet pussy.  As it happens no one even turned as you ‘arrhhed’.  Once you realise that no one took the slightest bit of notice, you get a little emboldened.  You lift your foot for more massaging, but this time you slide your opposite hand under your legs and start to play with your pussy….just to tease me…you horny bitch.

A table becomes free, so I stand up and put our drinks on it, before helping you up…You sit facing the canal and I face you, looking back inside the bar.  We are quite sheltered with trees either side of us.  I couldn’t have planned it better…I slip a shoe off and slide my foot up and down your leg (no socks…lol)  Even that turns you on, your legs are slightly apart, so I slide my foot up on to your chair, to stroke your inner thighs, your legs part further….so I push my luck and put my toes up against your pussy, it is still so hot down there and oh so wet…You close your eyes and concentrate on the sensations as my toes flick up and down your lips and bud.  I dip my big toe inside your wetness and you are about to moan, but your eyes flash open as you remember where you are.  You want me to stop, but you don’t attempt to close your legs so I continue.  Your breathing becomes a little deeper again you cover up by coughing, but the cough forces your pussy harder against my toes…you didn’t expect that and an orgasm instantly starts to overtake you.  You bite your lip to stop from moaning, again you try to cover your noises up with another cough…..that’s it you’re over the top.  I take my foot away to let you come down to some semblance of composure and you take a big drink from your beer.  That goes down the wrong way, which starts you coughing again…..and that gives you lots of mini orgasms.  A waiter brings you a glass of water, which you take very sheepishly, thanking him.


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Written February 13th, 2006

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  • cynic
    February 22, 2006
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    LOL.....glad you enjoyed......hehehehehehe.


  • Damaged-Rose
    February 22, 2006
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    yep! Now i most definately need a cold shower!

  • cynic
    February 17, 2006
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    LOL......glad you enjoyed.......but I'm 48 yrs and married LOL...but even we oldies still dream....LOL
    Have fun with your man....it makes life......wow.....hope you got some tips....LOL

  • XxMrzNaughtyGirlxX
    February 17, 2006
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    Awesome!! Love it..I'm sure you'll make your girl friend very very happy!!...Ooohh and when u get married!! you'll have her going WILD!!..Excellent!!..lol..really really loved it!!

  • cynic
    February 13, 2006
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    Thank you.....I shall have to put my thinking cap back on.....and probe the baser parts of my mind to complete it....LOL....glad you enjoyed


  • Poetic Sunshine gold member
    February 13, 2006
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    Very Very HOT....Wow! I have to know how it ends....This is amazing.....Great job,......Heather


  • Master Domtos rose
    February 13, 2006
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    woooooooooooowwwwwwwwwwwww ... and you thought my story was good!! I'm heading for a cold shower and bed ... the rest is for your imagination!!


  • cynic
    February 13, 2006
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    Yes...that's me....i get my pleasure from giving pleasure.....well nearly all the time ....LOL


  • BarefootSoul
    February 13, 2006
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    Sizzling

    Ho--t! Makes one want to run off for a weekend very quickly! Enjoy your style of writing and the steam you create with your words. You seem only interested in pleasing the woman you are with in this poem, quite a unique thing to behold.
    I am wondering if this is the end it can't be? Looking forward to reading the rest of your poetry now!

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