Stormed love and devotion,
My neverless mourn.
Souls long beyond ocean,
With 2000 shores.
Laid me to rest,
Seething away.
Waste not hollowed grave site,
Weeping, my feathers dekay.
Listless not wonder,
Die as you sleep.
This no realm reflection,
Scorned cursed so deep.
But if you really loved me,
You would have endourned my realm.
You seem take to pleasure,
From thee one last kissed healm.
Haste not thine wisdom,
Prophets so sweet.
Lure from destruction,
Grimmace striking to greet.....
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Written February 12th, 2006
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^ _ ^ thanks, glad you liked it.
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it's written sort of old english style, which i must say is a first in my contest. i like the plot, and i like your choice of words. good job, and keep up the great work!!!
Kirstay -
glad you liked it.
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This is very powerful and touching. Thank you for entering and good luck! I can feel the pain in this.
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I checked my spelling before I submited the poem.
thanks though.
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Very powerful stuff I feel the emotion,pain and helplesness!!
Check your spelling though.
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