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His Garden to Her

A settling of lovely sets upon her

She's overwhelmed, She's taken over

All her tears she cries were happily sorrowed

For he is never the moment she feels used or borrowed 

He's the air she breathes

Her everything she always sees

He is her star of life in the moonlit sky

The flights of her fancies are her cradling lullabies

His songs that kiss her softly and whisper so passionately

That the cure all of her illnesses will be caressed ever so romantically

His crimson blanket of assurance tremblingly flourishes her skin

All her daydreams of happily ever after begin with him

A promise that to every rose she is the most beautiful

His Garden to Her is the most lovely of all roses of plentiful

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Written February 12th, 2006

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  • Eckhart
    March 9, 2006
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    I got chills reading this it's just so well thought out! I loved it! great job!


  • Empathy-eyes
    March 2, 2006
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    This is such a beautiful write, especially due to the intriguing imagery. Excellent


  • Pretty Escape
    February 12, 2006
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    WOW, Hun. That is amazing. I love it. You have really improved. I mean your work was good before, but this is wonderful.