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A Bad Ending Follows A Bad Beginning

and I'm counting down the days till the sun burns out
and the moon fades away
for that will be the end of this war, my life.
everyday is a battle between life and death,
I've been fighting in the dark for far too long
I lost sight of all that is real.
tired of trying, this weight on my shoulders,
it's wearing me thin.
the pain in my heart, constantly eats at my insides,
slowly tearing me apart.
no use to run,
can't try to hide.
there's no escaping.. these deadly thoughts
always plague my mind.
nothing left to do, but patiently wait
for Death to call my name.

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written 1.12.06
Written February 12th, 2006

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  • zimbrino
    January 8, 2008

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    wow your a really good poet roogie.
    your poems are amazing
    im glad were in poetry class together.


  • Mieta
    February 14, 2006
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    love this one! great write! really emotional and very dark! loves -mieta-


  • Uselessbreathing
    February 13, 2006
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    HEY. i love this. My comment will be short because my parents think it is unhealthy for me to be on this site. THEY KNOW NOTHING. i hate them ( i know you reading this.) ahaha. love you. get on AIM soon. i need you rooey

    Lizzie <\3