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Some People

Some people blame it on the world,or our disgusting society
Some people say it's the best friend, who never does anything
All it takes is one time to open up,show your soul, learn to trust
The cuts may be deep but you have to want them to heal

When you believe the only way for you is up, you have to spread your wings
When you feel the music in your soul, just let yourself sing
You'll never know if the grass is greener on the other side if you're not willing to cross the road

So do me a favor, and give life a chance,give yourself a chance to start over, take a deep breath and open your eyes like a new born child

Sometimes blaming the people around you only gets you so far, then the rest is up to you, a story that is unwritten.

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Written February 12th, 2006

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  • nobodys-girl
    February 12, 2006
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    you know what doll? each time i read your work you get just a little bit more thoughtful, you think more of what your saying instead of just posting it up here (no offense i did the same thing when i first came here) and each time it gets better and better. i absolutly loved this and although i dont exactly follow this it still is really good advice. awesome job! love you lots!!!
    <3 Kk