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Fancy Whore

Just another kiss,
       dragged out for days,
a crazy haze
        makes me think I love you.
A fancy whore,
       caught in the lies.
And I let you take me
     with out your heart.
Thinking like a man,
             and not thinking
           at all,
 drunk and insane,
           another mistake.
And all I can say,
    is I'm sorry I raped
         myself.

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Written February 12th, 2006

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  • DarkChildsKiss silver member
    March 1, 2006
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    OW! This was so amazing and creative! Great Write!


  • bedazzled
    February 17, 2006
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    Wow speechless! Fucking awesome!

  • falling through
    February 14, 2006
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    wow...whoa...and other words to describe this. it has an intensity that jumps out at you...its super great. we should talk more...ya know? see ya in school...luv ya gurl
    ♥lacey


  • bluidbabiegirl
    February 13, 2006
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    whoa... That was awesome in its own special way. ha! I loved it...
    P.S. I wanna rape next, but only if you let me


  • mysticlabyrinth
    February 12, 2006
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    wow. that. was. amazing! lol i dont have words... so... angry and sorrowful but beautiful too! i love it!


  • Painted Warrior
    February 12, 2006
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    wow... intence...

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