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Be My Valentine

Breathe gentle upon my neck.

Exercise your fingers on my shoulders.

 

Massaging your love within me.

Yes, I am all yours.

 

Visit my soul today,

Always in your arms I will be,

Lingering fingers trace your outline,

Expect only the best,

Nesting in our own reality,

Treasuring every moment,

Inter-twined our spirits have become,

Now is the time for us to experience life,

Entrusted my heart to yours.

Yvonne J. Griffin
2/12/06

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I know that this is early but HAPPY VALENTINE's day to everyone.

Yvonne
Written February 12th, 2006

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  • angelica silver member
    February 14, 2006
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    HAPPY VALENTINE'S DAY my sweet friend.
    I hope it's a happy one for you.

    Hugs Joan


  • poetryality silver member
    February 13, 2006
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    Ah! Your sentiments are a delight! They make me want to run downstairs and cuddle next to my husband. Each line is tantalizing! My hubby's "breath on my neck" sends me into dizzy spells. You have written a love poem that is in no wise cliche, but brilliant!

    HAPPY VALENTINES DAY TO YOU MY FRIEND!

    Much Love,
    Renee
    aka
    poetryality


  • Roseleaf
    February 12, 2006
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    would it be nice!!!

    this is brilliant and blends in well with the picture enjoyed it very much and HAPPY VALENTINES DAY TO YOU HOPE ITS A GOOD ONE FOR YOU

    bestwishes pauline xxx

  • Cwm
    February 12, 2006
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    Quite the perfect valentine poem here... trust me it's never too early to express the love that you feel, it's a beautiful thing... sometimes once in the lifetime so enjoy!

    Curtis
    M.

  • PoetryGirl26
    February 12, 2006
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    awww pretty, pretty, I wrote an early valentine today too. It was just a writing kind of day and this was very sweet and had all the making for a beautiful valentine.

  • pozo
    February 12, 2006
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    Such a sensous and romantic write Keep writing and happy valentine's day to you too
    Thanks for your comment
    All the best
    Pozo


  • Sherry gold member
    February 12, 2006
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    Smiley, I liked this one its beautifully written
    such a passionate and tender piece great read.
    Hope you will have a nice Valentines day my friend.
    Sherry
    Edited on Feb 12, 1:39 p.m. because ''.

  • sad-but-true
    February 12, 2006
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    Nicely done my friend, I really liked the picture you used for this one. Oh! I don't think it is to early for this one. Happy Valentines Day to you also. Keep penning with your heart and I am sure that others will follow and read. ~val~

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