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Love is...

Love...

I think love is when you feel like the other person completes you. Its that crazy knotty feeling in your stomach that you get when you talk to them. That funny light feeling you get when you hold hands. That carefree feeling you have when you kiss, like the whole world stops just for you and the other person. Its all the little things that you say just because everyone else said they were unimportant. Everything you say is important no matter how big or small. When almost every song you listen to reminds you of that person in a way. When you talk on the phone for hours and hours on end about nothing at all but it was still worth while. Its being able to see the other person happy and it automatically makes you happy. Their smile or laugh makes you happy inside. You try your hardest to make them happy but you don't have to try very hard since they are happy with all the same things you are. Its being able to say anything and everything and feel secure. Its being able to feel safe when your in their arms. Its the feeling that the whole world doesn't exist and nothing can bother you when your with them. Its when your heartbeat gets faster and faster every time you think about them or get near them. Its all the little hearts you draw all over your paper and wondering if they have the same hearts on their paper too. Its that different feeling of security. Its when you can both say "I Love you" at the same time and then say "I Love you too" at the same time. Its when you can finish each others sentences. Its that weak feeling in your knees like your whole body is jello. Its that feeling that your head is light and your floating and nothing can take that away. Its that feeling that when your around them nothing matters. You arent thinking about your weight or your looks or anything like that. Its not caring what others think of you because you have that one person who finds you the best thing in the world and you don't need anyone else. Its knowing that you have the greatest person in the world to you and that's all that matters. Its that feeling that cannot be replaced by drugs, music, poetry or anything. Its that new feeling that makes everything better. Its feeling like you've never felt before, like you never lived or took a breathe or saw anything before you met them...

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Written February 12th, 2006

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  • Amunet Wolfbane Moderators member
    March 11, 2006
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    You really have some excellent points here, however for this contest, they asked for quotes. I don't really think this would qualifiy for that with the length. But it is well worth the read. Great job here