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Summer

As I sat there in the theater chair
I looked upon my reason for being there.

Almost intermission of this lovely show
I've looked at you the whole time you know.

I didn't know that you would be singled out
A song leaving me speachless without a doubt.

Taking it all in, my breath caught in my throat
My heart skipping a beat with each passing note.

The lovely sounds of bow on string
The smooth sound of violin made my ears ring.

Listening to every single sound you make
By the end of that song, my heart you'll take.

Closing my eyes while the song goes on
Almost smelling the scent of a fresh cut lawn

Seeing the flowers before my eyes
and imagining a lovely summer sunrise

Feeling the heat upon my face
The song wrapping me in its warm embrace

Taking me to another time, another day
Making the days of summer not seem so far away

This song you play gives me the shivers
Reminding me of days of swimming in the rivers

The song slows down to a lazy afternoon
fading to a night with a clear white moon

Taking me back to days so warm and long
Totally taken in by this lovely song

Sitting here in the theater chair
Gazing upon the reason I am there

Watching you play with such effort and soul
Every note of this song slowly making me whole

As the song ends and you take your bow
I'm taken in, my heart is yours now.

Author notes

This probably isn't at all what you are looking for, it's more of a love poem, but it explains where i first heard my favorite song, which is "Summer" by Vivaldi
I hope this is ok...
kayla*
(and sorry i kinda suck at rhyming)
Written January 20th, 2003

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  • Blushfulmoon silver member
    February 3, 2003
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    Oh Kayla
    I simply loved this one hun
    Good luck in my opinion this is the winner already
    Luv ya
    Susan~~~~~


  • veiled poison
    January 24, 2003
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    Awww, Kayla that's so sweet!!!!!!!! Awwwwww.
    LoL.
    ~Meez~


  • froglover80
    January 22, 2003
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    oh Kayla, this was beautiful....I dont know that song, or the artist, but guess I will have to look for it now...see what you do to me, you make me look for songs when I should be writing poetry and posting comments...whew, silly woman..anyways, simply beautiful...good luck on the challenge ~~Jenn


  • Dead Emo Kid
    January 20, 2003
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    aww this is a gooder... very nice hehehe so cute... I didnt listen to that song yet but u jus reminded me so i will listen to it now :)
    Kerry