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Forever and Always

How Blessed I am to be married to my Best Friend.
There is no one I'd rather be with than you my Love.
Each moment of our lives together is a cherished treasure.
Through all of the good and bad times,
I know I can turn to you.
When you look at me with your loving smile.
When you hold me in your arms,I feel so safe.
I know that no matter what else,
that all is alright in our lives.
Thank you, my best friend, my husband.
For chosing me as your best friend, your wife.
I Love You.
Forever and Always.......

Author notes

this isnt really a poem. i wrote this in a card i'm giving my husband for valentines day. even the card is handmade as my other hobby outside of writing is rubberstamping and scrapbooking. i cant wait to give my husband his special card. he's so wonderful to me. this past year as i'm battling with  cancer and going thru treatments, praying daily that my battle will be solved soon and i'll be healthy again. my husband is always lifting me up.      



Written February 12th, 2006

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  • Lamp
    October 31
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    what an awesome thing love is to share


  • Cherokee
    May 3, 2006
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    This is beautiful! You write with such love and emotion. This made me think of my husband.


  • misticmoonlite gold member
    March 16, 2006
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    oh! what a lovely Valentines gift to receive.. great poetry comes from the heart, no matter what others think you write and convey what you wish.. good luck and best wishes in your lifes travels..
    Linda


  • Master Domtos rose
    March 15, 2006
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    You raise me up so I can stand on mountains
    You raise me up to walk on stormy seas

    Your poem encapsulates the spirit of that beautifully expressive song. When you find a love like yours (and like the one i have), it is transfiguring. Never let it die, never let it fade away.

    Congratulations on a tenderly loving tribute write.


  • Desire gold member
    March 13, 2006
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    Bless your heart!!
    What a magnificent heartfelt piece...
    To have a best friend, husband all wrapped in one package
    What a blessing!!
    Thank you for sharing this write!!
    Wish you the best always!!
    and much love~Desire


  • Veronica Leigh
    March 9, 2006
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    This was so sweet and beautiful! I am so happy for you that you have someone so great in your life! it's a wonderful feeling!!!!! great job! Thank you for entering my contest and I wish you the very best of luck!


  • doughjoe silver member
    February 23, 2006
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    Yes you are so blessed to have a best friend and to be your husband on top of it how lucky you really are this is a wonderful poem to show the love Y'all share.. thank for you comment on my poem "Tommorrow"


  • NikkiR
    February 21, 2006
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    This is really, really sweet.
    I hope when I find my true love that he too can be my best friend.

    Kepp writing


  • noble1
    February 21, 2006
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    How very sweet. Looking forward to reading your poems.


  • Viyanna Rosemarie silver member
    February 21, 2006
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    awwww!!! aren't you so very lucky. to imagine that in my life is beyond me. you did a wonderful job and i hope he liked his card. viyanna r langager


  • Bigmammajen
    February 21, 2006
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    this is so beautiful.
    I could write this about my own hubby too

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