laying here wishing
i was in your embrace
open up my eyes
and i could see your face
every time you hold me
my world fades away
though the world keeps on going
in your arms i stay
i hear your heart, i feel you breathe
your body feels so good
i'd lay with you forever
only if i could
the feeling's undescribable
when i feel your skin
i would wait forever
to be with you again
you say you do not know
you do not understand
how this could be true
but take me by the hand
look into my eyes
and there you just might see
that anywhere with you
is where i want to be
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just my thoughts. i know it sucks. but it's on my mind.
Written February 12th, 2006
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i actually really liked this. mostly the ending. I havent written much at all... and I never find myself reading peoples work but... honestly.. this was worth my time. <3 kidd.
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thanks =) im just not used to writing like this. it's a new feeling. nice, but new. thanks for the applause
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sucks??? hey i love this... and... i understand. Whatever is happening... once your in thier arms everything fades into the background... even when there is something you know you have to talk about or need to discuss... once you feel them or see them it no longer seems to matter... just as long as they stay there... and come back. Thier arms become a sanctuary and their company become what you dream of... even when things are not great between the two of you. So you don't seem to like this... leave that to the reader or to yourself. You felt the compulsion to write it... to share it with others rather than leave it in your head and heart... so we are allowed to agree and love it. lol.. just whats on my mind.
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