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Fucking Birds...

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I stole your fire with secret words
What good is meat with missing teeth?
Love is for the fucking birds

Light consumes by moving towards
Black spaces above & beneath
I stole your fire with secret words

When what's projected reverts inwards
As all swords drawn from sheath
Love is for the fucking birds

The archons keep all men in herds
I've seen how your eyes bequeath
I stole your fire with secret words

For widowed queens and bastards
To burn the sky from underneath
Love is for the fucking birds

Lining up to gorge on innards
Upon precipice & mountain heath
I stole your fire with secret words
Love is for the fucking birds




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Written February 11th, 2006

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  • horus8 gold member
    February 12, 2006
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    I'd be interested in hearing your note. I like criticism from poets that I respect.


  • Cat gold member
    February 12, 2006
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    brilliant-


  • Heart Sutra
    February 11, 2006
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    This is pretty amazing, I must say. Nothing like an elventh hour entry! Astounding. Thank you. Gives me much to ponder.


  • Anthony-
    February 11, 2006
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    Brilliant words horus. A piece that can be digested on it's original viewing and taken away and thought about afterwards. Taking something away and then allowing it to be slandered is something that I picked up from this piece. I thank you for your unique presence. Originality is just something I adore in poetry. Tony.