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Princess

Princess

I want to be a princess
Yet I can only be
Imperfect in the shadows
As lovers pass by me

I long to know the feeling
To spend a sleepless night
And knowing that the next day
I'll wear pure, angel white

I want to be a princess
To know that I can find
A lover, friend, and husband
Who wants to know my mind

I see such feelings blossom
Love clings to those around
Yet I will never know it
For me, it can't be found

I want to be a princess
With flowers in my hair
And beauty all around me
One day without a care

I hold this prayer within me
Yet I confess to doubt
That I will be a princess
I'll always be left out.

By SparkleSatine*a.k.a. Leslie

Author notes

This is just about how I feel about my luck with true love.  As I get older, it gets more difficult to be positive.
Written February 4th, 2006

A contest entry

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  • kdanielle
    February 17, 2006
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    Great comment by the way kingscandlestick, kind hard to top that one, but I will give it a go. I really like this poem! It shows your most inner part of you, a part that so many are afraid to show and yet you did in such a beautiful way; poetry. You will find the counterpart of your soul, i just know it. But remember, you don't need a prince to be a princess!


  • Cyrik
    February 12, 2006
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    You express the yearning and the longing deep inside every women. To be loved, cared for and desired by someone above all else in their life. For them to know your heart, dreams and passions, and inspire you to bring them into reality, and stand beside you to help make them happen.

    And that is the rarest, most elusive love of all...

    Don't settle. The love that you see most others have and envy, it doesn't have the depth your soul needs.

    Brilliant poem, thank you.


  • wings of an angel
    February 12, 2006
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    WOW this poem is great, I loved it, beautifully penned


  • caesarjager
    February 12, 2006
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    This is so sweet, dont all us girls dream to be a princess? I feel you honey, I've been with a guy six and 1/2 years, we finally got engaged and now cant stop fighting, wedding talks have ended. I hope you and I become princesses soon

  • melonie74
    February 12, 2006
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    Beautiful

    This is really a nice flowing poem.
    Im holding out for hope.LOL Great write thats for sure!


  • Sparklesatine gold member
    February 11, 2006
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    Thanks so much for the astoundingly wonderful comment! Just knowing that you enjoyed it, and that you thought highly of it means a lot to me. Thanks again! Blessings to you, and you made my evening, SparkleSatine

  • Jessy La Bella
    February 11, 2006
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    GREAT

    THAT POEM WAS FANTASTIC. I COULD TELL IT CAME FROM UR HEART AND I ENJOYED READING IT. IT HAS MYSTERY YET A GORGEOUS SHINE TO IT. GOOD LUCK.

    MUCH LOVE
    JESSY

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