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Superglue

"And superglue,"
She said,
"will hold the pieces of my heart together."

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Just something that popped into my head... AP really does need a place where you can just put your scraps.. meh...
eX's n Ohhh's
Written February 11th, 2006

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  • Deadsmelly
    February 18, 2006
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    deep

    Why not duct tape? Deep indeed and sad that it should need repaired in the first place. If you ever need superglue or duct tape I've got a stash load of it for ya. Love ya!


  • Thoughtful Seeker
    February 17, 2006
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    kool,and honest

    hey chibs,like the saying,very kool as a quote if you ask me. it will stick in my mind. take care,and hope things get betta soon janny/impossibleone23/doctor danikins
    Edited on Feb 17, 8:44 p.m. because 'oopsy'.


  • x CheepPurfume
    February 16, 2006
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    Wheeeeeeee I ASHLEY I liked this heh good job!
    Tori


  • ChibberMonkey
    February 12, 2006
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    Yesh.. but it was awhile ago.. It was just deep, so im not over it.. shrugs i know i should be.. its been 6 months already.. but ... meh.. me no know.
    loves you


  • Flightless Raven
    February 12, 2006
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    lots of sad things, did someone break your heart, chibbeykins?

  • JPuchyr
    February 12, 2006
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    good little blurblet, i liked the choice of background as well, all in all very very good little poem, like Kelsey said very powerful for it's size


  • AngelDeAmor
    February 12, 2006
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    Short but groovy. I wonder if superglue really would hold a broken heart together. ( Puts a finger to his lips in deep thought about that. ) Maybe I should give it a try. If I can find all my pieces that is. It has been such a long time.


  • rower4life
    February 12, 2006
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    so, im pretty sure that this doesnt actually count as scraps! maybe its not a detailed poem with flowing lines, but... it counts as amazing!! it shares the exact same emotion in 3 lines as you could create in like 20... thats the power of words... its not about how many you can write down, its about what you can make the ones that you do write down mean... and youve made these 3 lines extremely powerful... full of meaning... sad meaning, but a meaning all the same ~ *hugs you tight* doesnt this whole holiday blow ?! ... i just want to completely skip over the day, pretend that it doesnt even exist.. if only it were that easily *pouts and sighs dreamily... one day * anywho angel, this was awesome... super glue is NEARLY as vital as duct tape bye bye angel

  • no cars go
    February 11, 2006
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    i concur! you get a few brilliant lines, and you're not quite sure what to do with them. i appreciate your pioneering into this um realm or whatever. superglue - one of the essentials of life. need it to fix things, but when seriously sniffed will kill some good brain cells. a very interesting few lines. i'm glad you shared!! thank you!
    no cars

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