I look into your deep brown eyes
As if trapped are my hollow cries
Our ties are stronger than you think
I found love and there's no turning back
For strength to move on I lack
I break our gaze with a wink
I thought that this would be great
Yet my soul is just filled with hate
For I feel as though I don't have to wait
I curse your name as I praise the sound
My head's just spinning round and round
These lies are so bold, but then again, who cares
In this world of fragile feelings, all heart
When will the real joy truly start
Continuing on seems like childish dares
Now this moment, a moment of so few
We have again another obstacle to get through
But why is it that I love you?
Author notes
Written February 11th, 2006
In a list
A contest entry
- speaking of love...... by tragediey-stricken.
300 points, ended February 21, 2006, 11 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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hey good job in the contest.. man you won first place great job... keep on writing great poems
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wowzers good job with this poem.. You won first place. your poem is relly good.. great job and keep up the good work..
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option number three
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This sounds good but which number did you choose?
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