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What do I Want?

You ask me what I want to do.
I tell you I don't know.
I lie.
I know exactly what I want to do.
I just can't make myself tell you.
I now answer you honestly.

I want to hold you.
I want to kiss you.
Forever.
Live in your arms.
Live on your taste.

I want to touch you.
I want to feel you.
Everywhere.
Caress your delicate flesh.
Smooth and warm, like silk.

I want you to feel.
Feel like you're alive,
Feel the love I have for you.
Like you're special,
Like you're my whole world.
You are.

I want to be touched.
I want to know you're with me.
Always.
Feel your soft hand stroking,
Feel more than anything before.

I want to feel you.
Feel your love for me.
Feel your body against mine.
Feel your heart beat.
Feel your lips against mine.
Feel your tongue dancing with mine.
Feel alive, like only you can make me feel.

I want to do anything with you.
I want to do everything with you.
I want to be with you always.
I want to be loved by you.
I want to love you.
Forever.

Author notes

Obviouses out of the way first: This is a tribute to Katie. This is the highest rated piece I have *ever* written. And yes, Tim's mind is WAY in the gutter right now. I know. Don't tell me so. And remember. IT'S YOUR FAULT FOR READING THIS, YOU READ THE WARMING! YOU ACCEPTED THE DISCLAIMER!
So if you were wondering what this is actually about, this is my answer to Katie's question to me of "What do I want to 'do' today?"
Written February 10th, 2006

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  • LymphBeauty
    June 7, 2008
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    how romantic and cute.
    Katie is very lucky to have you!


  • astarael003
    February 11, 2006
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    SyStEm OvErLoAd.

    That was... wow. Beautiful, and sweet, and loveyish, but... now *my* mind's in the gutter. Damn you. *wanders off to find Ezra*


  • BallroomAngel
    February 10, 2006
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    Wow

    Tim, first of all, this is beautiful. Secondly, I love being with you, I love doing everything with you. Thirdly, and most importantly, I love you. I love you more than anything. You mean everything to me, and I can't tell you that enough, I know.
    I love you, Tim.
    Katie


  • a sweetheart lost
    February 10, 2006
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    very nice. I love it.. and I love your comments. They make this whole write more personal. I love it I love it I love it!!!