Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

Distant (Sonnet)

Marvelous fate, bestow the boy to me,
convey a bounty of chitchats in hand.
Luminous friend-ship surfaces the land,
a humble abode to set two hearts free.
Bestial spirits waken, rise tonight,
attempting to destroy a lover's chance.
Born to be, in a long distance romance,
a love so sweet, the beasts feel contrite.
Perchance us devotees could shortly meet,
after, a craving of love we savour.
Over rippling oceans, the cold and heat,
I will stay with you, this is my waiver.
Straightaway, my magnified heart will beat,
it is now yours, hold it as a favour.

Author notes

Another entry brought to you by..English class! I've written this sonnet about my boyfriend who happens to live in Norway. There are always challenges in any relationship but I actually plan to see him in the summer, woohoo!

When online dating first started out in the 1990's, there were many success stories and they didn't even have as much luxury as we do now. Better quality webcams, more programs and games to enjoy with each other, application sharing, video conversations. I love the feature of talking to each other using microphones, it's free no matter the distance!
Written February 9th, 2006

What did you think

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments


  • Immortal Flesh
    May 10, 2006
    Edit | Reply
    lol, yes technology of useful tools in electronics is a great thing to have.
    It looks like english class is doing great things to you. If only I could get motivated like that somehow.
    A distant love can still be eased when one has the technology.
    Now if they could only come up with the technology to smell, touch & taste.....that would be awesome. lol
    but then, maybe thts just light years away ahead of our time.