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My Story

what is this?
a sad little tale
of a sad little girl
in a big bad world.
no one to guide her,
no one around
not a soul will listen
to her silent cries.
she hides the pain
and lets it shine.
hoping that love
will rescue her.
fate is a theory,
god is a myth.
family is a hypocrite,
and love is just a game.
values are ignored,
morals become law,
justice is impossible
and hell is where
this tale began.
that sad little girl,
her life brightened up.
she has you to guide her,
and your love is her rescue.

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To Paul, the love of my life, my knight in shining armor...
Written February 9th, 2006

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  • theprincess
    February 11, 2006
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    very nice. if the poem is about you i am glad you found someone - if not you are very good at imagining. go forward from this day forward knowing that hope should live in us all
    Edited on Feb 11, 6:29 p.m. because 'spelling again'.


  • Tarja
    February 11, 2006
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    Very sweet. Not as deep as I would hope, but it is a good write. Just in time for Valentine's Day. Well, I'm pretty sure Paul is your special one, so good luck to you two.
    ada


  • DreameeDarlin2U
    February 11, 2006
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    What an inspirational poem. Seems as though you've overcome many bounderies and finally have peace and happiness. Great job on this, I really enjoyed reading it.