Death was everywhere in the mountain air,
On her way to the convent the stench we bare.
Smells putrid as old outhouses on a hot day,
A western breeze took most of it away.
As suddenly as it came,
The gale did not stir.
Skies turning very dark,
My vision now a blur.
"We're under attack", swords sung, klink
Off with heads, from bodies they were linked.
She ran into the forest, into the trees
The smell hung there, she was on her knees.
"LORD Why?" my father is King!
I'm hiding like a animal untamed.
"Come my child, you will fly,
Pegasus is here so do not cry".
Angel, placed her on his back,'Cling to the mane."
Tell thy father are Knights are not the blame.
High in the clouds, the azure blue sky,
Descending; the castle gentle he did fly.
Safely the Angel delivered,
Our future's fair Queen.
Protected from her stepmother,
Who was evil and beyond mean.
Upon the throne one day she will reign,
Loving her people, the pleasants plain.
God sent an Angel from heaven above,
Protecting our sweet Princess of Love.
Happy ever after she lived,
Love was all she had too give.
People came from far and near,
To see Brishona cry golden tears.
Author notes
This is a fairy tale I have told all my children, now I tell it to my grand's.... this is all my own vivid imagination....Ennovy
Written February 9th, 2006
A contest entry
- FAIRY TALE CONTEST!!!!!!!! by Sahlili20.
450 points, ended April 10, 2007, 23 entries
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This is a beautiful write
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thank you for the tips on errors, I will edit them asap..Ennovy
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This is a very sweet poem and a very lovely fairy tale..
i really liked it and enjoyed reading it.. Thankyou for sharing.. Nice rhyme and flow, although you have a couple of spelling typos or mistakes like in the last line you wrote "protecting" without the "r" and you forgot the "s" in "descending"
Keep in writing .. this was very lovely
Nooni
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You have doen a great job on this poem, I do love a good fairy tale or romance. This might be a novel in the waiting, thank you for sharing and keep them coming. -
Tempo and rhyme was great. A fairy tale indeed, that I think I will read to my little one tonight..Your imagination went way beyond to make some on believe in fairy tale and dreams..Nicely done. I enjoyed this tale a lot..Good luck in the contest and thanks for entering. God bless, Brenda
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Tempo was rhyme was great. A fairy tale indeed, that I think I will read to my little one tonight..Your imagination went way beyond to make some on believe in fairy tale and dreams..Nicely done. I enjoyed this tale a lot..Good luck in the contest and thanks for entering. God bless, Brenda
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It might have come from your mind, but I think it was fine. Fairy tale or long tome lore. I like it and I wish for more!
This is a great story, the Shaker -
wow this was very cool, it was like reading actual fairytale. You had all the perfect elements in the poem, to give it that magical fairytale feel. Very nice work
much love
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