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Not with out my mom

Tears roll down my face
I hold a bottle of pills just incase,
I hid them in my coat
I also wrote a note
I put my note in my mom's coffin
Her favorite collection was lots of doffins
I'll miss her alot
The way she wore her hair
The way she would stare
The way she walked
The way she talked
The way she sang
Was like heaven's angels speaking to you
I wanted to be with her so bad
My tears just made me mad
Not sad,
I get in my car to go home
I took a few, only some
I felt it right away
I couldnt stay
Not with out my mom

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Written February 9th, 2006

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  • Darkbabe
    February 9, 2006
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    so sweet and sad.


  • Master Domtos rose
    February 9, 2006
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    All I can say is "ouch".

  • luvmybabys
    February 9, 2006
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    oh my,just the meaning behind this poem and the ending breaks my heart,not sure if it is true or not,if it is I am so sorry if not I am so sorry for everyone who has to go through that,feeling sad after a loved one passes away,I lost my dad a little over a year ago,and this poem touched me deeply,it is very sad,thank you for the read...luvmybabys...