all the morbid questions,
that fly out of our mouths at night,
{bats taking flight}
all the things i could have said,
{instead}
would you fuck me on my death bed?
then let me be,
(strangled)
as you held me in the black ink of the night,
the sex appeal of sorrow,
give in to the broken glass,
that sprang from my lips,
like sharp kisses on the neck,
or wounds you won't forget,
[even when i'm dead]
just look me in the eye,
as the ice falls and shatters,
and reveals who i am inside,
do you mind?
my reasons shortly leaving,
but that's alright,
i'll lose my life tonight,
cause that's all i've ever wanted,
to feel your kisses moving down my neck ,
in moment's ecstasy forget,
and never feel regret,
as you bite my lip,
{sensational acid trip}
your hands in the places,
my dress didn't reveal,
but that's ok,
the dress is gone now anyway,
with nothing left to give away,
cause there's nothing left that's real,
just sheets and skin and (the) steal,
(of your exact knife)
don't make my dreams come true,
(nightmare)
always there,
so involved with you,
in sunken solitude,
[we lie]
as we leave this world,
this life,
behind.
Author notes
wow! this poem took me a wile! not my best, but hey wut the the hell! enjoy it! hate it! print it out and burn it! whatever! i don't give a fuck!
Written February 9th, 2006
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I’m not sure what it is but there is something about it that just caught me. That painted this picture in my head. I don’t know how to explain it.
I can see the bats, and someone gasping for air, and pleasure out of sorrow, and those black ink blobs that they show you and ask what you see, and broken glass, and a casket, and blood, and a lipstick kiss stained on someone’s neck, and an elegant but simple (red) dress, and a black empty room, and light suspend in air.
It’s beautiful. You are a very talented writer.
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Aw you little jack rabbit you!
Dammit Raven
I miss you!
Oh...and because you NEVER are able to tell who I am,
it's Steph.
Umm..if you'd like, I will fuck you on your death bed <33
xD
Much love. Much love.
~The Muffin
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ur such a mofo, ray! but it was pretty no matter how horny it was, lol, i love u
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wow raven just wow. youre getting SO talented.
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when you read me this on the phone i was speechless... i still cant find my words...
i just simply love it
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i like this poem its really good raven
p.s,im sorry i wasnt the one for you ill still love you always deep in my heart -
I guess I can't call you my little girl anymore
lol .. I like this one hun 
love you .. mummy faerie 
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yay another poem!!! heehee this is really good... yeah kinda morbid but hey nice rhyme, nice flow, great one
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