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Telling

You looked around the room,
And saw that everything was bright and colorful.
You saw the snow-like clouds outside,
And the cloud-like snow on the ground.
You saw the back of my head,
And you looked at my swaying hair,
You smiled and you rested,
Peacefully.

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Written February 9th, 2006

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